Reviews for Darkness Within
mummsy | 2009.01.24 - 08:55PM | 11: Full of Spices | Signed |
it's been grim reading so far, but it is now obvious healing is happening - lets hope they both benefit and continue to heal, to a nice soft fluffy ending?
Author's Response: ahhh yes.... soft a fluffy is always good. I get the feeling though, it wont be that smooth, especially when Severus is in the mix. Thanks for reading. |
lkmaide | 2009.01.24 - 08:02PM | 11: Full of Spices | Signed |
awhhhhhh. .. . sigh
Author's Response: lol... thanks for the review. I take it you liked it? |
regs | 2009.01.23 - 08:09AM | 10: The Heart of The Matter | Signed |
Now it's Severus turn to show her what lovemaking is all about (and I know you won't let us down)
Author's Response: You might need to patient - Hermione has some recovery to do before we get there! Thanks for sticking with it!
Author's Response: You might need to patient - Hermione has some recovery to do before we get there! Thanks for sticking with it! |
shameful_desire | 2009.01.22 - 10:34PM | 10: The Heart of The Matter | Signed |
Great story, can't wait to see future events unfold. Glad to see a more familiar Severus this chapter. Ebil chapter though..I was expecting more-didn't realise until the last line =D Update!
Author's Response: mm, not sure what you mean... but thanks for reading anyway! |
Charlotte Brandon | 2009.01.22 - 12:07PM | 10: The Heart of The Matter | Signed |
Well I thought that it was something along this lines... Pretty traumatizing... I am however curious to see how Hermione and Severus relationship will proceed... Keep up the good job.
Author's Response: ahhh now... Severus and Hermione... let's just say 'It's gonna be a bumpy ride'... lol |
lkmaide | 2009.01.22 - 11:07AM | 10: The Heart of The Matter | Signed |
Ahh, the mystery unfolds. I'm surprised that the DEs didn't make her bring back Her parents memories so that it would be even worse for her. Brilliant tale, truly! Lay on MacDuff.
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive feedback... it's so unlike me to write something like this I wans't sure how it would be recieved. Hope you enjoy the rest! |
Loyd1957 | 2009.01.21 - 09:17AM | 8: Some Riot | Signed |
Now we can see what started the whole thing. I can only imagine the next chapter will be very dark and disturbing. Very welld one.
Author's Response: The next chapter is pretty dark...and then, we begin Hermione's recovery. I hope ou keep reading! Thanks! |
pragerr | 2009.01.20 - 09:53PM | 8: Some Riot | Signed |
I was wondering what had brought Hermione to such a state, but that might do it... You have lots of room to take this in a number of directions. Great start!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I was worried people might feel it was going too slowly, but now there are some answers, it seems to be picking up! Glad you're reading. |
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