Reviews for Darkness Within
sevspet | 2009.02.04 - 03:54AM | 16: My Best Friend | Signed |
I am just loving this story. You've done a great job developing the relationships and I cannot wait to see where you take this. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: wow! Thank you so much. I am glad everyone seems to be loving the story. Keep reading. |
MollysSister | 2009.02.03 - 11:40PM | 10: The Heart of The Matter | Signed |
H's revalations were just heartbreaking in this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you... I am glad you felt moved. |
MollysSister | 2009.02.03 - 11:37PM | 9: Catharsis | Signed |
You havent mentioned but I assume in Snape's cleaning frenzy that he dumped all the booze she had in the place?
Author's Response: Intersting train of thought.... no. lol.... |
MollysSister | 2009.02.03 - 11:34PM | 8: Some Riot | Signed |
You would think with all the SS/HG fan fic I have read I would have guessed what her troubles were. Nop! You threw me completely off the trail. Poor Hermione
Author's Response: Excellent! I would hate to be boring... |
MollysSister | 2009.02.03 - 11:27PM | 6: Oblivion | Signed |
The old spy is getting soft. I cannot believe he turned his back on her. Still its a cry for help that she enverated (is that a word?) him before she warded herself in.
Author's Response: I think the word is 'ennervated'... but yes, a cry for help it certainly is :) |
MollysSister | 2009.02.03 - 11:24PM | 5: The Storm | Signed |
Its ironic that Hermione demands Severus tell her about the night he rescued her and yet she wont tell him how she came to be a drunk. Funny that.
Author's Response: lol... its a deeply intruiging tale.... |
MollysSister | 2009.02.03 - 11:17PM | 3: On The Edge | Signed |
This chapter reminded me of the movie Leaving Las Vegas. Have you seen it? Instead of Nicolas Cage being the drunk trying to kill himself its Hermione. Huh.
Author's Response: No I have never seen the film, however... I do know some people with alcohol issues! |
MollysSister | 2009.02.03 - 11:13PM | 2: Consequence | Signed |
"his salt and pepper hair was dirty, pushed in slick lengths behind his ears" ewwwwww icky! I still have a million questions. Look at me going to the next chapter
Author's Response: lol... I love all your little comments... keep going.... |
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