Reviews for Darkness Within
Lost2life | 2009.02.04 - 08:03PM | 17: Parting is Such Shit, Really. | Signed |
Great story and self harm was well handled
Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's not an easy subject to talk about but real life all the same. |
verasuspense | 2009.02.04 - 06:01PM | 17: Parting is Such Shit, Really. | Signed |
Severus should do the same thing as the hero of A Man And A Woman: when Hermione arrives in Paris, she finds him standing on the platform, waiting. Whereupon, if she follows the movie script, she flings herself into his arms. :-)
Author's Response: Blimey, I wish I'd thought of that - it would have been terribly romantic! Mind you, this is SEVERUS we're talking about, right? Thanks for reading! |
sheri22 | 2009.02.04 - 05:43PM | 17: Parting is Such Shit, Really. | Signed |
That was terribly sad! Poor Severus... Amazing update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes, it was sad! |
Charlotte Brandon | 2009.02.04 - 04:21PM | 17: Parting is Such Shit, Really. | Signed |
Oh! Damn!! I really thought they were at least kissing goodbye Not tell that I was expecting an overly dramatic scene where Severus would profess his never ending love for her and ask her to stay. I really expect for him to throw his fears out the window as it is plainly obvious that Hermione feels the same way and as QuinnMom said fly to Paris…
Author's Response: Yes... he should have told her shouldn't he? But he does have a habit of keeping everything close to his chest as we know...silly Severus!! Thanks for keeping up with the story. |
past | 2009.02.04 - 04:01PM | 17: Parting is Such Shit, Really. | Signed |
I love the chapter title! But really, Sev needs some lovin, was it really neccessary to send her away without a kiss, even! Please don't make us wait to long for an update!
Author's Response: Sev does need some TLC, you're right... but he needs to tell Hermione tht, doesn't he?? Thanks for reveiwing! |
Alatariel Leralonde | 2009.02.04 - 03:22PM | 17: Parting is Such Shit, Really. | Signed |
How or why he ever let her walk out the door I will never know. I hope they BOTH come to their senses soon! I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Fear of rejection, fear of hurting her with the strength of his passion? Who knows... either way... something will happen!! Thanks for reveiwing. |
QuinnMom | 2009.02.04 - 02:49PM | 17: Parting is Such Shit, Really. | Signed |
Geez, Severus, get yourself a broom and fly to Paris! Stop expecting Hermione to figure out what you are thinking and feeling and get on with it!
Author's Response: EXACTLY!!! See... you should have written this story! Thanks for reveiwing! |
regs | 2009.02.04 - 08:55AM | 16: My Best Friend | Signed |
What, What...Ginny that was very bad timing! Let her go to school but she can come back every night and be with Severus! We want them to be happy!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes... happy endings are nice. Shame they don't always happen though, isn't it? Keep reading though... you never know! |
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