Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld
Andromeda | 2011.08.30 - 12:09AM | 5: Chapter 5 | Signed |
George simply laughed. Best line of the chapter, lol. I can totally see him doing that when Harry and Ron scuffle. That was going to be my review, however, I then saw other reviews about the contraception charm... oh crap! I hope that she did it after Malfoy! I do NOT want that happening... off to read the rest :D |
Scyn | 2011.07.11 - 10:11AM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
What a ride! I enjoyed it quite a lot although Hermione seemed a little out of character, but I understood with the way the story turned out. Quite interesting. |
jodywartooth | 2011.06.03 - 07:54PM | 28: Chapter 28 | Signed |
I really loved this story! Couldn't put it down, as my boyfriend can attest to. Keep on writing, and I'll keep reading! |
DistinctVagueness | 2010.11.27 - 07:22PM | 28: Chapter 28 | Signed |
I really do envy your ability to weave a story together like this, it really was a fantastic read and I enjoyed every minute of it. It's definitely one of the best post-DH stories out there, I think. And as I'm someone who tends to prefer pre-DH, that's saying a lot for me. The only thing I would say is that I felt lacking a little bit of closure. I am sure that without the bond, Hermione and Severus will work through things to a very fulfilling relationship, but I would like a glimpse of that. So if you're ever inclined to write a bit more, maybe even a one-shot in follow-up to this, please follow that impulse! ;) But that aside, as I have said, very good job, thank you for writing. -DV |
DistinctVagueness | 2010.11.27 - 12:26AM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
*Snape
And this is why one should read fic at a proper computer, rather than on a phone. Apologies for the typo. -DV |
DistinctVagueness | 2010.11.27 - 12:24AM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
This was slightly chilling in some aspects, but I couldn't look away! Superb chapter, although I feel somewhat stupid now for starting to believe in Lucius....or am I?
Fantastic writing on the ritual, I could really picture this hungry, yet gentle Snap returning to life. Can't wait to continue reading tomorrow! -DV |
DistinctVagueness | 2010.11.26 - 10:40PM | 2: Chapter 2 | Signed |
I retire from Ashwinder for just a while, and I returned and find I've been missing out on this treat! Just a note to say that, two chapters in, I'm thoroughly enjoying how this is shaping up so far. Quite original and refreshing and I love the inclusion of Lucius. -DV |
ruthless527 | 2010.11.11 - 01:31PM | 28: Chapter 28 | Signed |
I really enjoyed reading this story. My favorite stories are the ones where Snape and Hermione fall in love slowly instead of just all of a sudden and I think you did a wonderful job displaying it. |
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