Reviews for Breaching the Otherworld
verasuspense | 2009.05.26 - 10:44PM | 19: Chapter 19 | Signed |
Either Severus is giving an Oscar performance, or he actually doesn't know what Hermione is talking about. Narcissa *said* that they were looking into the dining room, but what if they weren't? What if it was all some kind of illusion? But there's no doubt Severus *is* lying about something. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
hogwartsgoddess | 2009.05.25 - 10:43PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
Southern, you write amazing stories and this story is no exception. I know I'm reading something phenomenal when I continue to think about it after I'm done reading. Keep up the amazing work dear. |
Jong_Kahn | 2009.05.25 - 12:39AM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
Your revenge on Rita Skeeter was every bit as delicious as my imaginary squishing of her--and I really liked your sleight-of-hand, making us think Dotty was going to doublecross Severus. Pretty clever! But now you've got me worried for poort Hermione. Uh-oh! Something tells me there's going to be a long road to hoe before she's happy again...if ever. Good chapter! |
WishYouWere | 2009.05.23 - 11:29PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
What a dirty trick..leaving us hanging like that!
I do like how you have written Narcissa. I will always think of her as self-centred and coniving. In canon, I tend to hold her largely responsible for Serverus' death. |
arianwen2 | 2009.05.23 - 11:23PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
... after all this, I don't know what to think about Severus. Has all this been according to his and Lucius' plan, is Severus playing Lucius or is he manipulating them all for his own ends? Poor Hermione ... even if Severus truly loves her, how will she ever be able to trust him again? And if he has been lying to her all along, it will be incredibly difficult for Hermione to trust anyone ever again, not to mention trusting her own judgement. |
Firewall | 2009.05.23 - 08:50PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
Ohhh, what a wonderful little twist! I love the way this story is developing so I hope you update soon. |
sevslove | 2009.05.23 - 08:14PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
Haha! Go Hermione. Way to fool Narcissa. And I don't know what to think about Severus. It really could go both ways huh? Great update, I can't wait for more!! |
sifferi | 2009.05.23 - 05:39PM | 18: Chapter 18 | Signed |
Oh, this relationship has so many obstacles, it seems to be doomed... |
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