Reviews for Soul Searching
| Jong_Kahn | 2015.08.01 - 12:23AM | 18: 18: One Of These Things.... | Signed |
| This is one of those stories that deserves a much wider circulation. Now that it's in the archives on a slow rotation (of however 'Random' decides which story pops up next), it still deserves more readers than it has now that it's years old. Such good writing! I'm very glad I found this one again. Another "10", because you deserve it. |
| loreen77 | 2011.04.03 - 11:28AM | 18: 18: One Of These Things.... | Signed |
| Very poetic that he gets to watch her as she watched him. |
| decarde | 2010.05.20 - 03:23PM | 18: 18: One Of These Things.... | Signed |
| Loved it! |
| LazLong | 2006.07.25 - 06:59AM | 18: 18: One Of These Things.... | Signed |
| "That's when I hear it.
"Severus…"
And in that moment, I know I can face anything."
Wonderfully written climax:) |
| sparklekenda | 2006.05.11 - 05:57AM | 18: 18: One Of These Things.... | Signed |
| I never thought an angel would be sent to watch over a gargoyle. You brought tears to me eyes with that sentence. What a stunning chapter. I adored Seeing Severus' POV itflowed so smoothly and naturally. |
| kamelia | 2005.12.15 - 12:38PM | 18: 18: One Of These Things.... | Signed |
| loved it! |
| Amr | 2005.05.04 - 08:05PM | 18: 18: One Of These Things.... | Signed |
| Very nice...and symmetrical! I love the way you're using this little green book as a light contrast with the more elevated motif of the soul potion. I gather from your original author's note that it was accidental, but you've integrated the two very satisfyingly. And I knew it was Severus's point of view from the third sentence--the change in voice was very skillfully done. |
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