Reviews for King of Swords
Shiro Ryu | 2009.12.17 - 01:40AM | 11: Shatter | Signed |
Hooray! A lovely new chapter! That was a quick turn around. Trelawny's last statement regarding repair of the cracked mirrors sounds pretty ominous. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes! Those two chapters came pouring out. The repair question has been burning all along -- it'll be interesting to see how they figure this one out :) |
Aren Silver1 | 2009.12.17 - 12:37AM | 11: Shatter | Signed |
Why do i think this is leading to the veil and the department of mysteries? Btw I LOVE this story
Author's Response: Good thought, but I'm not sure... Hmm. There will need to be a great deal of exploration about mirrors -- magical mirrors, and how they work, however.
I'm so glad you Love the story! Makes my day! |
Losumi | 2009.12.17 - 12:07AM | 11: Shatter | Signed |
You blow me away -- already such an intricate story, and now more facets come to light. Fascinating detail and intertwining solutions. Excellent!
Author's Response: *dances
Thank you, Losumi :) It's going to continue to be intricate and complex. Exploration of magical mirrors is next... |
AmyLouise | 2009.12.16 - 10:18PM | 6: Fate and Spirit Combined | Signed |
Your use of the cards was superb - I was wondering whether the Ogham deck was real; I hadn't heard of it before, but it sounded as if it really meant something.
I was holding my breath as Severus read.
Author's Response: I'd never heard of Ogham, but it fit the requirement of the prompt for a Druidic magic. This story began with a challenge prompt (believe it or not). But now, we are free to deviate and go where we must. I found the reading helpful in crafting the writing, so I'm glad I did it! |
Shiro Ryu | 2009.12.15 - 11:03PM | 10: Seedlings | Signed |
Another excellent chapter! So now we have three people who believe and are working on a solution. Perhaps answers will come more quickly for them now. I wonder what (or who) will be Neville's symptom relief? I also can't wait to see what happens when they approach Harry and Ron.
Author's Response: Yes! Things are accelerating now... and you're asking excellent questions :) |
AmyLouise | 2009.12.15 - 09:31PM | 3: Crowning Card | Signed |
I started reading this story quite a while ago and then lost it for some reason. There's a wonderful darkness to it that is very real and believable, but now with Snape joining forces with Hermione, a glimmer of light.
Wonderful imagery.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you refound the story. The glimmer of light is very important here :) |
Losumi | 2009.12.15 - 02:20PM | 10: Seedlings | Signed |
I'm so happy to see a new chapter. This is an intriguing and involved story, and I get sucked into it more and more with every word I read. Very beautifully created and described!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for letting me know. I'm glad it's compelling. It's heating up now... |
Aren Silver1 | 2009.12.15 - 02:23AM | 10: Seedlings | Signed |
Thank you so much for posting on this story, i LOVE it. I really hope things work out in the end although i have no idea how they will. Snape is perfect by the way,one of the best progressions from his character in the books that i have seen.
Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for your comments about my writing of Snape -- *blushes.
Keep reading... that glimmer of light is important...
:) |
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