Reviews for King of Swords
Celira | 2010.03.10 - 07:58PM | 17: Reunions | Signed |
Such a powerful story. There are very few stories written in this sort of style but you've wrought it masterfully and beautifully (and maybe reminiscent of Ariadne? or am I just reading too much into her beta work? ;) ), and thank you for sharing this with us.
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for the comparison to Ariadne's writing. We are good friends, and I suspect that our similar styles emerge from a deeper similarity (rather than her early beta reading having a direct influence on my style), so, yes--you're not the first to notice the similarity. That's the greatest compliment, ever, actually :)
I'm delighted you're enjoying the story and the style, alike :) |
Lady DuLoc | 2010.03.05 - 01:46AM | 13: Stone and Glass | Signed |
That last bit really got to me. Well done, you.
Author's Response: *grins
*bows
Thank you! |
sqHPfan | 2010.03.04 - 10:13PM | 17: Reunions | Signed |
so beautiful . . . . .
Author's Response: Thank you :) |
Tangerine Dream | 2010.03.03 - 05:38PM | 17: Reunions | Signed |
Wow! Another powerful chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! So sorry for my lag time in responding. Exchange story is posting now, and I'm getting back into the headspace for more KoS. :) |
AmyLouise | 2010.03.02 - 09:21PM | 17: Reunions | Signed |
There was great tension in that chapter, and you built it and let it resolve very well. For all that he genuinely loves her, I'm sure, I think Hermione's right, and Severus is the link between them all and the Shadow. I would guess it has something to do with the Dark Mark, but I'm sure we'll find out soon enough. Can hardly wait.
Author's Response: Interesting speculation there... We're getting to the bottom of things. Finally. It's good to hear that the rhythm of the chapter worked for you. Thanks for the thoughtful review :) |
Loyd1957 | 2010.03.02 - 12:49PM | 17: Reunions | Signed |
That was another intense chapter. Getting them to all realize what was happening was like the dawning of a new day...you could just feel how they all realized what had happened. Love that last part with hermione and snape...it's just love, not the magic.
Author's Response: First, apologies for taking so long to reply to reviews. *hangs head
It's the love, not the magic, yes, indeed. I'm so glad that you could feel that shift happening! Yay!
Thank you :) |
knittermama | 2010.03.02 - 11:54AM | 17: Reunions | Signed |
I don't think there has been a chapter of this story that I haven't read with a tear (or two or twenty) running down my face.
Author's Response: *hands you tissues
*hugs
Thank you :) |
severus49 | 2010.03.02 - 10:41AM | 17: Reunions | Signed |
No matter IF Severus loves Hermione - and it's obvious he does - I think Hermione's definitely right when she said Severus is the catalyst for the healing.
Author's Response: I think you're right on both counts :)
lalalalalala
*grins |
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