Reviews for Paper Faces on Parade
loreen77 | 2013.03.02 - 06:33PM | 1: One-shot. | Signed |
Lol, loved it |
darkbutterfly | 2008.10.23 - 04:25AM | 1: One-shot. | Signed |
heh, adorable. if you hadn't mentioned that it was black, the mention of feathers actually had me think of a 'big bird' mask, big orange beak and all :D |
SandyKinns | 2008.10.20 - 04:09PM | 1: One-shot. | Signed |
I loved this :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D |
tracykuhl | 2008.10.15 - 12:53PM | 1: One-shot. | Signed |
Great story. Simple but rather effective. I have to ask though; was it intentional to end up getting Masquerade from Phantom of the Opera stuck in the heads of your readers every time they see the title? Or am I just that much of a PotO nerd? =)
Author's Response: Thanks! The title was definitely intentional and based off of Phantom - the song being stuck in one's head was a fun side effect. :D |
verasuspense | 2008.10.15 - 09:44AM | 1: One-shot. | Signed |
I did follow the back and forth and it seemed to me that it was Hermione's turn to speak.
Author's Response: It's definitely Snape though; the "Severus" later on confirms it :D |
JamesandLily4ever | 2008.10.14 - 08:00PM | 1: One-shot. | Signed |
It goes Severus, Hermione, and then Severus again (or something like that). About "you have beautiful eyes"... I loved that, but who said, "You didn't like it!"?
Oh, and the last line's "this" should be "these". ;D Besides that, this needs more, even though it's a one shot. ^_^ May be add one sentence about how the two of them ended up kissing that night? *giggles* This was still nice, by the way. 10/10!
Author's Response: Hermione said that line; thank you very much for your review! :D |
gryffindor | 2008.10.14 - 12:01PM | 1: One-shot. | Signed |
Call me a perfectioninst, but it's these masks in the last line, not this masks. Apart from that, very funny.
Author's Response: No! I welcome any corrections! :D Thanks for your review. |
regs | 2008.10.14 - 10:57AM | 1: One-shot. | Signed |
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D |
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