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| dressagegrrrl | 2008.09.25 - 10:06AM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
| I actually read this over on adultfanfic, but when I saw you on the HGSS Digest, I thought I'd pop on over and leave you a review. :)
"Sweat was glistening on his upper lip, and he removed his jacket. Hermione watched, mesmerised, as his long fingers unfastened every last button. As he shrugged his jacket from his lithe frame, Hermione noticed his taut, muscular shoulders, and as he turned to hang his jacket on a hook behind the door, she bit her lip to stifle a gasp. His shirt had clung to his back with sweat, and the translucent fabric caused the welt marks and other ragged scars to shine through vividly. Unaware of this, Severus rolled up his shirtsleeves, and Hermione’s eyes drifted to the now faded Dark Mark on his forearm, before flicking back to the scars on his back. "
These were my favorite few sentences in the fic. The description of her visceral reaction both to Severus as a man, and her reaction to his scars was very well done. I read this yesterday and had a stupid little smile on my face from it. :) Author's Response: lol.... you could have left me a review at AFF but thank you for making the effort - and I am very pleased you enjoyed the unveiling of Severus, his scars and his lithe frame.... phew, making me a little warm now too! | |||
| Strawcherry | 2008.09.25 - 09:45AM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
| Er, *gulps for air*. Hehe, this was great. Very sensually written. Every sentence, every word breathed the tension and although the ending came a little quick, it was very sweet and sexy. Author's Response: mmm, yes... about the quick ending - I am writing a second installment from Severus's POV..... | |||
| miamadwyn | 2008.09.25 - 08:58AM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
| Exquisite. Author's Response: Thank you so much! | |||
| MerrinBeta | 2008.09.25 - 08:03AM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
| This piece is a perfect little snack. The last few lines were absolutely brilliant payoff! Author's Response: Thank you so much. I enjoyed writing something that wasn't too graphic but sort of gave the gist of it anyway! | |||
| trekchick | 2008.09.24 - 11:59PM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
| Dear Merlin, I just loved your sweaty Severus! Made me sweat reading this little treat. Author's Response: ahhh thanks... I got a little hot under the collar myself! | |||
| ladyjulian | 2008.09.24 - 10:54PM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
| Lovely and perfectly done - with clear, distinct characterisations. Author's Response: Thanks. It's not always easy writing Severus, but I felt he would be a little more relaxed towards the end, since he knew Hermione (and noticed she had the hots for him!). | |||
| Imhilien | 2008.09.24 - 07:19PM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
| Very nice... :) Author's Response: Thanks :) | |||
| JamesandLily4ever | 2008.09.24 - 07:01PM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
| Too fast, too fast! Still great though. ^_^ (This was a happy chapter, not quite like the sad Coldplay song. Yeah, I have it on my mp3 player. It's one of my faves. ;]) 10/10! I wish there was a sequel about how their lives were later on. (One one-shot companion for the other) ^_^ Loved this one though. Author's Response: mmm, I am writing a second chapter from Severus's POV - I want to know what HE was thinking now.... | |||
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