Reviews for The Scientist
JA Lowell | 2008.11.09 - 10:49PM | 3: The Scientist | Signed |
That last bit -- Minerva fixing his hair -- was what really made this story for me. So subtly amusing!
Author's Response: lol... thanks! I wanted to show that Severus is human. And every love story has to have some laughter in it! |
Eve_7564 | 2008.10.26 - 09:25PM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
Very nice! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. |
banana53080 | 2008.10.03 - 11:19PM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
Delicious!!! What a wonderful bed time story.
Author's Response: thank you! I am adding to this - I wanted to know what happens next.
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Shiro Ryu | 2008.09.26 - 11:21PM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
Sweet, very sweet. I loved it! |
cee2lee2 | 2008.09.26 - 07:39PM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
So descriptive. You made it easy to understand how Hermione was rendered unable to speak ( until she was required to make her choice! ) Glad her brain was still functioning well enough to make the right choice. :D Great last line. |
joannie | 2008.09.25 - 09:44PM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
Lovely bit of of before bedtime reading. joannie |
MollysSister | 2008.09.25 - 02:20PM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
Oh this was fun to read about the seduction of minds from Hermione's POV. I am glad she chose a kiss too! Yipeee!!! |
siage | 2008.09.25 - 10:55AM | 1: The Scientist | Signed |
Perfectly written! At this level of writing the buildup is far more satisfying than reading about the act itself. THANK YOU!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing - I am very pleased you enjoyed it :) |
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