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Reviews for Tonight You're Mine Completely Part II

soccermom2008.08.02 - 12:01AM3: The AwakeningSigned
I went back and reread Part 1 and then the first 3 chapters of Part 2 today. It's a very interesting story. I love your writing and the way you develop your characters. Looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: I am totally overwhelmed that you went back and read all the chapters. Thank you for leaving me a review. It really is the only way to know if what one is writing is what readers want to read. The next chapter is still with my beta and the one after that is almost ready to be sent to her. I regret the lag, but I am comma inhibited and can not pass the admin comma test without help. I am pleased that you enjoy the way my characters are developing. That was my intent - to give the characters reasons for doing what they did - which makes for a longer writing but I feel gives it a purpose. I'm not big on student Hermione/Professor Snape stories given the climate of our times. I can see Professor Snape musing over student Hermione, and Hermione becoming aware of him as more than a her teacher, but as Dumbledore said in chapter 7: ...as long as she is your student you must maintain a 'hands off' policy... Yes, of course, I have read those stories, and I am not condeming anyone who writes them, it is just that I can not in good conscience do it. Thank you very much. Appreciatively joannie

llama82008.07.15 - 01:25PM3: The AwakeningSigned
This is a great story. I can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hi, thank you for reviewing. It makes it easier to gauge whether you are writing what anybody wants to read. I worried about the Lily aspect when I started this story before we had as much knowledge of Lily as we do. It just felt right to me, but I didn’t know if anyone else felt the same way. The next chapter is with my beta. I'm sorry for the turn around time, but it does help ensure that the chapters have fewer errors and reads smoothly. Appreciatively, joannie

septentrion2008.07.10 - 02:30AM3: The AwakeningSigned
No review yet? How unfair. I like how Severus comes to the realisation, which is much more than the knowledge, that his relationship with Hermione is special. I only regret you don't update more often, but I guess real life interferes too much with your writing time.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Yes, slowly, Severus is coming to this realisation, but he has to reconcile his feelings for Lily. It's been a long time, but he still loves her. The thought of someone taking her place is to him absurd. joannie




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