Reviews for The Price Was Right
| cottontail | 2011.11.17 - 04:48PM | 9: Sunday - Guess What? | Signed |
| That was pretty funny, nicely done. But damit Severus did you really have to leave? |
| cottontail | 2011.11.17 - 04:40PM | 8: Sunday | Signed |
| LOL, is she going to just show and possibly see herself staring back at her Oh God I hope so.... I forgot to mention it on the last chapter but while they were making love looking into each others eyes as tears ran down Hermione's face it was so bitter sweet, but then after Severus had his orgasm he lost all emotional control and broke down. That was a wonderful thing you did for her. To let her see him, really see how much she meant to him. I am such a sap, so it really touched my heart. |
| cottontail | 2011.11.17 - 02:28PM | 7: Saturday - Promise Fulfilled | Signed |
| I must say that you handled this very delicate situation wonderfully. Though the fact that she needed the fire whisky did bother me a bit. I was impressed how you described the way he prepared her, bringing her to orgasm first to relax her, taking care to touch and massage other areas of her body and the tremendous amount of lube he used. Being gentle, slow and not rushing proved to be all very loving and erotic. This act alone will strengthen the bond that they already have, there is so much trust that comes from this, more so than any other sexual act they will ever experience together. Giving oneself completely over to another person in such a way shows unconditional love, trust, acceptance and devotion. Though the mere thought of it is not for everyone including my own husband which I would never even broach the subject but I can understand the want and desire behind it and the closeness it can bring. Beautifully and wonderfully done. |
| cottontail | 2011.11.17 - 01:52PM | 7: Saturday - Promise Fulfilled | Signed |
| HA ! I KNEW IT. I have not read the chapter yet but the first few lines you put in as a warning proved me right. Heh he... can't wait to find out how you handled it. :-) |
| cottontail | 2011.11.17 - 01:49PM | 6: Saturday Night | Signed |
| Ok, I might be wrong but I have a sneaking suspicions what that promise was. I can't wait to find out if I am wrong or right. (Deep Sigh) " The most important day of my life" completely just choked me up. I love how there is NO signs of Lilly at all in this fic. Heh he, people complaining about the sounds coming from the room, hee hee just priceless. |
| cottontail | 2011.11.17 - 01:36PM | 5: Saturday - ten a.m. | Signed |
| Well, well, well, isn't that interesting. Lavender has been using poly juice and Ron has no clue as to how different she is? Well, my guess is that he is so grateful for the action that he does not question any thing. I think that the poly juice should wear off Lavender during sex. Have Ron deal with what has been happening, and then have Hermione come home to witness it. Sorry, my loyalties lie with her and Severus on all levels. Oh your lemons, and what wonderful lemons they are. sigh |
| cottontail | 2011.11.17 - 01:20PM | 4: Friday - three a.m. | Signed |
| Yum, Gods don't I wish I were her. Oh those lemons leave me breathless. But, how heartwrenching it all is. Please keep them together... |
| cottontail | 2011.11.17 - 01:07PM | 3: Friday - The Getaway | Signed |
| Oh my, what a totally, arousing, erotic chapter that was. Phew, cigarette anyone? |
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