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Reviews for Agoraphobia

hiddden2008.08.21 - 07:04PM9: The Begining of the EndSigned
This is really sad and horrific. Great writing but unpleasant reading.

Author's Response: I am not sure whether to say thanks or I am sorry. :)

AmyLouise2008.08.20 - 12:32AM9: The Begining of the EndSigned
This is truly a shocker - combining the psychological torture with the physical is really depraved. You've painted a very grim picture indeed - great work.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

AmyLouise2008.07.24 - 12:13AM8: Another Version of the TruthSigned
Lucius truly is despicable - the man doesn't even care for his own son. He's totally warped, and so is his evil little elf. This chapter is very cleverly squicky.

Author's Response: Thank you. Lucius and Mot are a perfect pair.

AmyLouise2008.07.23 - 11:58PM7: Help Me I Am In HellSigned
I feel so sad for poor Severus; just when he might have thought he was in thrall to nobody for the first time in decades, he's made a prisoner in such a dreadful way. I never saw Lucius as being so twisted, but I'm sure it's him.

Author's Response: You were right, it is Lucius. You will find out just how twisted he is in chapter 9, which is ready to post. Thanks for the review.

AmyLouise2008.07.23 - 11:36PM5: SanctifiedSigned
I know the villain can't be Severus, but it certainly looks as if it's Lucius Malfoy. Severus must be the "half-blood traitor", and is obviously dreadfully wounded in body and mind. And the father of Perdita. The tension is so hard to bear, but this is great writing, and I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks

Darque Hart2008.07.22 - 04:28PM8: Another Version of the TruthSigned
Another great chapter;) It's interesting to read the background info. Like Cedrella Black being with Abraxas before she married the blood traitors. Had she stayed with him, the Weasley horde might not have happened! No Percy!

Author's Response: Cedrella, Septimus and Abraxas are all canon characters with unknown stories, so i gave them a story. I am glad you liked it.

Sampdoria2008.07.22 - 01:43PM8: Another Version of the TruthSigned
I am truly happy to see the update, and Lucius and Mot are doing a "good" job as the bad guys, but I must admit that the fact that they are getting away with all their cruelty makes me a bit squeeky. In a way they proove that evil is the way to sucsess and it troubles me. I can still kling to the hope that you will make sure that Lucius days of glory is no a part of the past and that pain, punishment, humiliation and destruction will their future. (I am blood thirsty and always get annoyed when the bad guy get away with torture for years and just get his life ended witha Avada. Eye for an eye etc is more my motto and though I want Lucius dead, I want it to be with a lot of pain, not a swift and painless avada...:-)) I guess Harry will have a dreadfull day when he discovers that he has "helped" Lucius in being able to torture Hermione as he has done? I really hope that Lucius won't be able to kill Narcissa? I honestly think that it is about time that his regime ends and Narcissa deserves better than having a scum like him kill her. I also hope that the children affected by his mudblood-programme are saved and helped? Oh my, it is quite the list of things I want, but it is all based on my want for justice and revenge:-))

Author's Response: Lucius will get what he deserves and soon. Thanks for reviewing.

Bek Allen2008.07.22 - 10:48AM8: Another Version of the TruthSigned
Oooooh, and the plot thickens! Okay, so Lucius is the bad guy - a good baddie at that. But, an evil elf? Wonderful! I didn't know that house elves could be bad. (In saying that, I realise people will be like, "But Kreacher...", and Kreacher was so much evil, as he was just a little bastard, who was rude to everyone.) I loved it! I can't wait to read more, please update soon.

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked my evil elf. I wanted tp surprise people with the villians.

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