Reviews for Till Death Do Us Part
Kittens | 2015.03.10 - 11:56AM | 1: One shot | Signed |
Haha, Original Sin was not exactly like this but this was beautifully done.
I have a minor issue though. The problems between them is not fleshed out enough to make believable that attempts on each others' lives is necessary. Unless the SS & HG that you write off are a little off (bonkers).
I don't mean to sound harsh and it was an enjoyable read.
And I think considering it IS SS we're talking about, I am sure he must have at least one bezoar on hand?
(hopeful smile)
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loreen77 | 2012.06.16 - 03:41PM | 1: One shot | Signed |
reminds me of the old move "war of the roses". well done. |
Jenniemay | 2011.08.15 - 09:18PM | 1: One shot | Signed |
Ah, this brings back memories. Only it wasn't in the wine. It was in the fruit. He'd injected the grapes (her favourite) and she'd injected the strawberries (his favourite) with poison. They'd fought argued and bedded. Then in a caring act they grabbed the fruit and fed each other. She strawberries, and he ate grapes. I did a part were it was a newspaper add, ''Till death do us part'' was the heading. Were it went to describe how the couple had been ''experimenting with poisons and reactiveness to foods.'' and accidentaly poisoned themselfs. As their research showed that they'd taken their own. When they'd figured out it was too late, the kissed and embraced. Both dyin in bliss. Poor maid when she found the couple in middle of a tryst... Dead. :) thank you for making me recall work from my high school years. |
Logbrandur | 2011.06.17 - 10:10AM | 1: One shot | Signed |
Awesome twisted little story :)
I wonder what happened exactly in the months before that evening... |
ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.10.12 - 02:26AM | 1: One shot | Signed |
are they really gonna have a Truce now? what happens next? were they or hermione poisoned from drinking from those glasses from dinner??? will there be more chapter to this story?? PLEASEEEEEEEE??????
Author's Response: What happens next is entirely up to you, as I intentionally left an open ending so it's up to the reader. The story is complete, so no more chapters will be coming. My own view of what happens is that they each used a poison they had an antidote for, or had built up an immunity to. If they didn't, though, Winky is certainly going to have a nasty surprise! |
ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.10.12 - 02:15AM | 1: One shot | Signed |
they try and kill each other? WHAT????????????? dont know how am meant to take that info hehehe!! okey thats no laughting matter!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: According to the prompt I wrote this story for, yes, they do try to kill each other. As for it being a laughing matter, well... depends on how dark your sense of humour is! |
Half Blood Outcast | 2010.08.10 - 01:27AM | 1: One shot | Signed |
I just have this hilarious image of the two of them springing out of bed, completely starkers, and streaking through their home looking for their respective antidotes playing in my head. then they just look at each other and laugh. lol it's certainly what i would do. . . then i'd go find winky and poke her in the forehead. . . vigorously. lol wonderful one-shot, dear!
Author's Response: That is a very funny image! Glad the end of this oneshot resulted in that for you. Thank you! |
moonaia | 2009.10.05 - 12:50PM | 1: One shot | Signed |
I like the ending. Had some reaction from my husband when laughing hard, just when everything was quiet....
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm delighted to hear that it made you laugh! |
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