Reviews for Bright Morning Star
| duj | 2022.09.29 - 06:47AM | 10: A Dreaming Shock | Signed |
| "he knew Dumbledore was far too noble" to wipe her memory? On the contrary, it's canon that Dumbledore is willing to wipe memories: he wiped Marietta's in book 5 |
| duj | 2022.09.29 - 06:40AM | 8: Consequences Realised | Signed |
| "She was always trying to see the better in people..." Well, she can pretend that to herself, but it's not how you've written her. She's been very negative to Snape in this chapter - and given that he was the allied health worker (is there another way to describe it?) who healed the patient, Roma's refusal to even take a message to Dumbledore, let alone send for him pronto, is extremely unreasonable. |
| hayam | 2016.02.01 - 07:41PM | 40: Epilogue | Signed |
| Interesting and sound plot, delightful to read. Thank you. |
| Jadecadence | 2014.01.21 - 11:23PM | 40: Epilogue | Signed |
| rona and that capable ministry authority who witnessed the blood test result, can't they fall in love and get married? :)) bloody good story btw. |
| Jadecadence | 2014.01.21 - 11:09PM | 35: Chase! | Signed |
| any reason why you called the ship thus? MOM withyship? |
| Jadecadence | 2014.01.21 - 04:24AM | 28: Romancing The Ghost | Signed |
| is Elizabeth Rurden one of your fav. authors? |
| Jadecadence | 2014.01.21 - 03:55AM | 26: The Secret Library | Signed |
| salazar's personal library was a nice touch. i hope to know more details of the other founders' personal libraries in the next chapter. as well as maybe how many books did salazar have? |
| Jadecadence | 2014.01.21 - 03:35AM | 23: A New Beginning | Signed |
| unrequited longing.... urgh! how well i know it! :))) |
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