Reviews for No Loyalty in the Moonlight
loreen77 | 2016.02.07 - 12:37AM | 19: Breath | Signed |
This is riveting. I am enthralled and can't await your masterful conclusion of these mysteries. I am especially curious about Neville's mist suddenly coming back to shape his full ghost. |
greenwood | 2008.04.17 - 12:05PM | 19: Breath | Signed |
Aghhhh the tension is killing me!!! Another brilliant chapter wtih wonderful bits of tension - the "too large" ring, the bleeding ghost, the little girl ghost with the seed, the seed itself, and now the entry of Nevell....so good. I will have to read the entire story again once it is complete so I can feel the flow. I can't wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response: *smiles quietly* I am absolutely breathless and quite touched that the details are so captivating to you. You are absolutely the ideal reader for this story ;) Thank you so much, greenwood... Cheers, ~ Ari |
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