Reviews for Salazar's Heir
|snapefan1983||2014.09.30 - 04:07PM||15: A Visit From The Ministry||Signed |
|if hermione isnt a virgin how can she still go near the small unicorns?? “While you’re at it, why not forcing me to marry Voldemort? After all, there are proofs that there is something between him and me. But before we discuss this, we’re going to see the unicorns. No spell can fool them. Will their testimony be enough for you?”
Amelia nodded slowly. Hermione took the lead to the foals’ paddock. The golden foals were ecstatic to see her and, when she slipped in the paddock, they ran to her to welcome her, butting their nose against her stomach, begging shamelessly for caresses.
“I present you Dana and Lena,” she said proudly, petting them heavily. “Obviously, they seem to think I’m pure, sir.”
Cornelius tried to approach but one of the foals turned around, presenting him with its rear. The Minister backed up quickly. Severus mentally thanked Firene for making Hermione the daughter of the unicorns. It was proving more and more useful with each day passing by. Amelia stepped forward the foals but received the same welcoming as Cornelius. She nodded, her dark eyes serious.
|chrissyseebs||2006.04.30 - 12:53PM||15: A Visit From The Ministry||Signed |
|that was an exciting chapter|
|firstname.lastname@example.org||2004.10.25 - 03:07AM||15: A Visit From The Ministry||Anonymous |
|had to stop to give you a great review. i hope if JK reads this she enjoies it as much as i do. if not for the joining of those two i would think i was reading on of her novels. i cant wait to read the rest so i will review again later|
|Lena||2004.01.21 - 08:44AM||15: A Visit From The Ministry||Anonymous |
|I like how the story is coming along, very well thought out and it doesn't actually go ooc too much (you know, other than the smut...but let's face it, we're all here for the lemony goodness!) Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens when Samhain comes around... should be interesting :)|
|Clair||2004.01.21 - 08:25AM||15: A Visit From The Ministry||Anonymous |
|Fudge and Sev indeedy do... *cracks up*|