Reviews for No Loyalty in the Moonlight
|Lucy||2016.11.20 - 09:13AM||4: Have This Dance||Signed |
|Awesome writing! I have no idea where this is going! Loving it all!|
|loreen77||2016.02.02 - 11:15PM||4: Have This Dance||Signed |
|What a profound sense of loss I felt at the idea of longbottom as a mist. Heartbreaking. |
|audrolla||2009.08.13 - 10:48PM||4: Have This Dance||Signed |
|I spy sound parallelism. Its execution is quite effective.
I've never read a fanfiction of this caliber before. Nice work.
|hobgoblinn||2008.04.05 - 09:27PM||4: Have This Dance||Signed |
|The opening scene with Longbottom as a mist, working up the courage to dance, is brutal. Such a lovely, haunting detail. The mystery continues, and the foreshadowing / emotional atmosphere is very well done.|
|AlbusSeverusPotter||2008.03.24 - 10:08PM||4: Have This Dance||Signed |
|I figured out where I've seen both stories. I think restrictedsection? My brain didnt register that i'd read it on a DIFFERENT site ;)|
Author's Response: No problem at all! I really appreciate your question - it could have been a huge error on my part, so I went to check to be sure I hadn't reuploaded the text of Chapter 3. I'm slowly catching up here... there are 23 more chapters already posted elsewhere. Cheers! ~ Ari
|AlbusSeverusPotter||2008.03.24 - 09:50PM||4: Have This Dance||Signed |
|woah. deja vu? did yuo repost this or is there a glitch in ash's system?|
Author's Response: Chapter 4 is a new chapter to Ash, but it's been posted elsewhere for a while... it's showing me the correct text for all four chapters; are you seeing a repeated chapter? Please let me know and I'll see if I can get it fixed. Thanks for flagging the possible glitch! ~ Ari