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| kudlatek | 2017.03.20 - 06:47AM | 9: Stubborn and In Love | Signed |
| Lovely fic, although I agree with Tracysgate that it was rushed at the end... like something was missing. Nevertheless - I did enjoy the reading. Author's Response: this was written for a challenge/gift exchange and was time sensitive. | |||
| marisamarinee | 2014.07.12 - 12:01AM | 9: Stubborn and In Love | Signed |
| So sweet Author's Response: Thank you very much! Thank you for reading and for the review. | |||
| marisamarinee | 2014.07.11 - 08:49PM | 7: The Arraignment | Signed |
| I'm so glad! Author's Response: I"m glad you're happy. Thank you for reading and for the review. | |||
| marisamarinee | 2014.07.11 - 06:16PM | 4: The Friendship’s Challenged | Signed |
| Heheh I found this chapter to be the funniest Author's Response: It was the discussion on the roasting pot, right? Thank you for reading and for the review. | |||
| deejay | 2013.03.04 - 11:19PM | 9: Stubborn and In Love | Signed |
| The ending chapters are just fine as they are. All the necessary activity is there, and the chapters are lengthy. Well done. Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm delighted that you like it. Than you for reading and for the review. | |||
| Tracysgate | 2013.01.19 - 08:30PM | 9: Stubborn and In Love | Signed |
| i loved it. although it did feel a little like you raced toward the end. it was very well written and believable. great work :) Author's Response: Thank you very much. *blushes* I kinda did at the end, I'm so sorry, but it was one of the gift things on a gift exchange and I was running out of time... I had thought of rewriting the entire ending, but decided to leave well enough alone. I'm glad that you still enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and for the review. | |||
| rapture8 | 2012.05.20 - 07:41AM | 9: Stubborn and In Love | Signed |
| I really enjoyed this story. However, i too feel like the last chapter was rushed. Althougt, i still have added it to my favourites list :) Author's Response: I hate admitting, it was and only because this one was for a SS/HG challenge and there is a time limit/due date. I had thought of rewriting the last chapters into my usual style, but left it as is. I'm glad that you liked it anyway. Thank you for reading and for the review. | |||
| Maria | 2012.04.24 - 12:27AM | 3: Healer and Housemate | Signed |
| I'm enjoying this so far, but this Hermione is very, very fanon. She's all "oh, you're such a good man, all those nasty you did during the war were all for the greater good, blah, blah, blah." She's still a teenager, and just a few days ago she thought he was a mortal enemy. She may be a bit more 'mature' than the boys, but come on. She just spent a harrowing year in the forest and running around as a fugitive, getting tortured by Death Eaters. She KNOWS what he's capable of, what he's done, the group he was in league with. Just because she now knows some of the truth doesn't mean she'd drop her guard, or all of a sudden start hero worshipping. She just comes across as a Mary Sue in this story which is a shame, because your writing is better than this. Author's Response: Maria, sorry you're disappointed. You're right, post war trauma, but I'm not sure she ever thought he was a 'mortal enemy' so much as a dark guy. To quote a TV character "Lady, I am the bad element," Michael Biehn as Chris Larabee on The Magnificent Seven. Yes, she was tortured by Bellatrix - who's a loon in my book. She would know SOME of what he's done, but she's a girl who fights for lost causes. (Besides, it was fun to write.) But I'll agree, it's a bit fandom-Hermione. Sorry for that. I'm glad that you enjoy my other stuff. Thank you for reading though and for the review. I appreciate your honesty and your comments. | |||
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