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| verasuspense | 2016.12.12 - 06:32PM | 1: Vanilla and Pepper | Signed |
| Why so coy about the fact that Hermione married Malfoy? That much was obvious from the first. The only question was if it was Lucius or Draco. | |||
| Jong_Kahn | 2010.12.27 - 11:57PM | 1: Vanilla and Pepper | Signed |
| I found this story oddly unsatisfying. I liked its plot; just something about the way it was written didn't seem to ring true. Still, I'm glad I read it. Thanks for your work on it. | |||
| adelgado | 2010.11.18 - 03:13AM | 1: Vanilla and Pepper | Signed |
| Very interesting. Thanks for sharing | |||
| Wistful_Stargazer | 2009.04.27 - 04:01PM | 1: Vanilla and Pepper | Signed |
| The description for this story, under "Genres" states that it would have a Menage a trois. It did NOT have a Menage a trois, which totally stank! You really should pull that tag out from the genres listing. What a bleak life to be married to a man that is obsessed with power and no longer is the loving individual as at the beginning of the marriage--poor Hermione. I'm glad that she was able to help save Severus' life, and also find passion in his arms. It feels as if something is missing from this story. Almost as if it were streamlined down for submission, and in the process some of the plot was cut out; not unlike a Hollywood movie. | |||
| darkangel_001 | 2008.03.01 - 12:54PM | 1: Vanilla and Pepper | Signed |
| This is was very well written. It is the first time in a while that I have seen a story that is so different. I really loved the idea of a cold Hermione, + it's nice to be able to read a story that goes beyond the usual happy ever after following the war. Keep it Up!!!
PS: I don't agree with one of the other reviewer I think you ended the story very well, having a sequel would dilute what makes this story so special in the first place-although I do agree that you could possibly write another if you have a strong enough plot to keep it going through, since you have led the scene there for a sequel really well. Author's Response: Thanks darkangel_001! Yes, tha happily ever after thing is really not my style, I like to be a bit evil to my characters, but not too much of course. lol As for the sequel; I think this plot could be strong enough for a good sequel, but I think, that story should be very independent from this one. That's why I decided it to be a one-shot. Well, I have to think it over carefully, because you're right, a badly-written sequel could ruin the whole concept. Thanks for sharing your ideas - they've helped me a lot. wings | |||
| Linneh | 2008.02.29 - 03:54PM | 1: Vanilla and Pepper | Signed |
| So good! it doesnt sound like it just ends here though., Author's Response: No, it really doesn't sound so. lol It is because I chose to end it with a cliffhanger and continue it with a sequel. I hope I will get to that soon, as well. Thanks for reviewing, wings | |||
| lilghostgirl | 2008.02.28 - 07:43PM | 1: Vanilla and Pepper | Signed |
| what a wonderfully original story. it was a very nice distraction. Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! I worked really hard on that one! It is my best story so far! Thanks for appreciating it! | |||
| KiraAriannya | 2008.02.28 - 07:42PM | 1: Vanilla and Pepper | Signed |
| Nice story Author's Response: Thanks! | |||
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