Reviews for Seven Days
| Jong_Kahn | 2015.04.23 - 11:58AM | 11: Part Two, Day Four | Signed |
| They can always tell Minerva it was her fault--if it weren't for her, they would have never thought of doing it! It's a lie of course, but it would irritate her no end! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2015.04.23 - 01:32AM | 6: Part One, Day Six | Signed |
| Wow. Hermione was indeed tired if she failed to brush her teeth before bed at the end of the chapter. |
| Jong_Kahn | 2015.04.22 - 11:06PM | 1: Part One, Day One | Signed |
| You're one of my favorite writers here; I'm very glad I've discovered this tale. |
| marisamarinee | 2014.09.14 - 05:22PM | 3: Part One, Day Three | Signed |
| Seduction is in place |
| marisamarinee | 2014.09.13 - 07:50PM | 2: Part One, Day Two | Signed |
| I see someone is jealous |
| marisamarinee | 2014.09.13 - 05:24PM | 1: Part One, Day One | Signed |
| Poor Sev. It's not going well for him |
| cemar11 | 2012.01.04 - 06:24AM | 6: Part One, Day Six | Signed |
| Loving it.
Just one little issue; The phrases "The both of them" and "The both of us" are regional slang from a small area of the UK. Someone as educated as Snape would not usually slip unless he lost his temper an it slipped out. Note the example in the 2nd film when he is livid with Harry and Ron to the point of almost spitting and grabbing for words. |
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