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| Anarche | 2008.02.22 - 08:48PM | 1: One | Signed |
| Wow! I can't wait to read more! I think this might end up being a favorite of mine... [BTW, watch out for non-spell-check typos...there's a phrase near the end that looks like you changed, but forgot to change part of it--"advantages and deleterious" should most likely be: "advantageous and deleterious". I had to pause to think about what you meant and it interrupted the flow of the writing. Didn't read closely enough to see if there were more mistakes, though.] Author's Response: Thanks for spotting the typo you are right, I have read that bit so many times and not spotted it, a case of the eye seeing what it expects.Oh and thank you for considering adding it to your favorites.More as soon as I correct and submit. | |||
| mizie | 2008.02.22 - 07:50PM | 1: One | Signed |
| Wow....Thats all I can say. I do hope theres more. Brilliant! Author's Response: Hi mizie there is more ,I'm happy you liked it.Thanks. | |||
| Redzer | 2008.02.22 - 06:36PM | 1: One | Signed |
| Can't wait for more - really liked your writing style, jumpy but right ! Ah the jealous Professor may vaporise the Lump that is Krum..... No? ah well, can't wait for the jealous side of Severus to shine through... will he concentrate on the growing 'friendship' with Rose firstly, win Hermione's heart through her daughter's pure eyes, mind and heart ??? Anyways, love to see more of this story, your first chapter has caught me !! Author's Response: Hi, it is not my normal style but some of the images were so strong ,I wanted to see if I could build a story without them getting lost in more detail.Only my beta knows the rest of the story but there is more Krum ,don't think that gives too much away.Very happy to have caught you. | |||
| redheaddoxy | 2008.02.22 - 04:30PM | 1: One | Signed |
| I'm really enjoying this so far. I like how you skip forward in time, but i still know what's going on. I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thank you there is more on the way, just got to get the last commas and stuff right. | |||
| persephone_bound | 2008.02.22 - 03:48PM | 1: One | Signed |
| This is an excellent beginning. I'm loving the Rose/Severus dynamic; there is something so charming about watching him interact with a small, intelligent child.
Also, I would echo that Krum has to go, but where would the fun be in that? Jealousy (acknowledged or not) is so entertaining. :) Author's Response: I liked writing the Severus /Rose scenes but I always like to see him ever so slightly out of his comfort zone.Now just what is it with the anti Krum league, he's just a nice sweet lump getting in the way ,what's wrong with that?(more evil sniggers) | |||
| sunsethill | 2008.02.22 - 11:24AM | 1: One | Signed |
| I wasn't too impressed with the first couple of vignettes--and then you caught me and pulled me through to the end of the chapter wanting more, more! What I first thought was a defect has become a strength and I'm looking forward to future glimpses of life. I especially loved the vignette that showed Rose slightly grasping Severus' ridiculously big-worded explanation of potions. Author's Response: It was a bit of a departure from my normal style,but I'm glad you enjoyed it .I hope the rest will not disappoint. | |||
| tinytexans | 2008.02.22 - 11:03AM | 1: One | Signed |
| What a beautiful beginning. I loved the 'perhaps I should have gone with the bottle fame speech' bit. That was great! Go away, Viktor... Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. So what's so bad about Krum? (evil grin) | |||
| Rae7910819 | 2008.02.22 - 10:43AM | 1: One | Signed |
| Rose was my favorite character, aside from Severus himself. But really, Krum has got to go. Lol. Author's Response: More Rose I promise ,can't say anything about Krum though. | |||
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