Reviews for The World All Out Of Joint
lostsoul27 | 2008.03.16 - 08:39AM | 1: One | Signed |
Absolutely beautiful story! I love the ending- it was perfect. I hope we'll see more of your work soon!
Author's Response: I did debate whether or not it was going to end with an 'ah,' or a 'you can't do that.' Of the two the 'ah' was the better ending .I have a couple more stories but they are not ready to go yet.Glad you enjoyed the story.Thank you. |
Fizzabella | 2008.03.16 - 12:13AM | 4: Four | Signed |
I haven't seen another story by you. If this is your first effort, it's amazing. If it's not your first effort it is still an amazingly wonderful story, with on-target characterizations and dialogue. Very well done!
Author's Response: Hi, yes this was my first venture into HP.I have written a couple of other stories before for another Fic-dom.
Thank you for the kind words. |
Eden_Lilly_Snape | 2008.03.15 - 11:48PM | 4: Four | Signed |
‘Secret Divination lover.’
LOL
Great story. At first I wasn't going to read because of the way it was written, but then I did and I loved it.
Author's Response: Glad you did read it ,I agree that this style can be difficult to hit just right.Thanks for reviewing. |
phone lady | 2008.03.15 - 09:50PM | 4: Four | Signed |
VERY GOOD HEART TOUCHER FOR SURE DO IT AGAON!!!
Author's Response: I have a couple more in various stages of completion, both are different in style to this one though.Thanks for the review. |
dressagegrrrl | 2008.03.15 - 09:45PM | 4: Four | Signed |
Lovely! Very sweet. I wasn't sure I was going to like the style the story was written in initially because when that tone is used poorly, it's terrible! However, I thought you did a wonderful job with it, and consequently it worked VERY well. Good job. I'll keep an eye out for more of yours.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the praise.I have a couple more on the boil , then I just have to decide if they are good enough to post. |
sunsethill | 2008.03.08 - 05:40PM | 3: Three | Signed |
Sigh. I want to squee about the beauty of each passage. I'm so glad that Rose and Hermione were persistent. I especially love Rose saying she will curse anyone mean to Severus when she gets old enough. No wonder he couldn't resist her.
Author's Response: I'm blushing with the praise .However he really didn't stand a chance against the two of them. It helps make my day to know people are enjoying this.Thanks. |
sifferi | 2008.03.08 - 01:37PM | 3: Three | Signed |
Oh, so beautiful! Reading the third chapter I almost felt like time had stopped and there was nothing in existence but these particular events.
Author's Response: Thanks you for such a heartfelt review. This story has given me a great deal of pleasure to write ,and a large pile of scrunched up paper,but to know it affected someone so strongly makes me smile with my heart. Thank you |
Titania | 2008.03.08 - 11:38AM | 3: Three | Signed |
~sniff~ You made me cry! Gorgeous story. Live long and prosper, Titania
Author's Response: Peace and long life Titania.Thank you for reading and I am glad you are enjoying it.I am sending a virtual hanky your way. |
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