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Reviews for The World All Out Of Joint

Zhaneraal2008.05.07 - 01:24AM2: TwoSigned
Inside, his hands are splayed flat against the wood; gods he wishes it were her face he was touching instead. -- This is such a spectacularly evocative image. Well done.

Author's Response: It is the image the rest of the scene was made around and was, in my mind's eye, one of the strongest of the story.I am happy my scribbles gave you enjoyment.Thanks.

Pyttan2008.04.12 - 10:12AM4: FourSigned
Oh how I have wanted this for Severus! He deserves it! Lovely read!

Author's Response: Well the advantage of fan fic is we can give the potions master a better deal.Thanks for the review.

kavita2008.04.10 - 12:34AM4: FourSigned
wow, i almost cried with the reconcilation of Rose and Severus scene. Bravo for such an emotional, serious yet happy short fic. A very satisfying read!

Author's Response: So Glad you enjoyed it thanks.

alien_duck2008.03.28 - 02:46PM4: FourSigned
Beautiful, thank you,

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.Thanks for reviewing.

sunsethill2008.03.18 - 06:54PM4: FourSigned
Lovely picture of the joys and passions of two people with quite a temper. I especially loved the shouted proposal in the Entrance Hall and Snape's ability to clear the spectators in eight seconds flat. But Hermione needs her mouth washed out with soap even if she was in labor. ;-)

Author's Response: Hi again.Glad the last chapter pleased. I didn't want a conventional hearts and roses proposal hence...and the labour scene was partly inspired by a friend who opted for natural childbirth.Her profanity decreased in propotion to the drugs she eventually asked for. Thanks for reading and reviewing all the chapters :D

persephone_bound2008.03.17 - 08:12PM1: OneSigned
YES!! This was wonderful. I remember reading the first chapter and thinking what a great start it was, and now, here it is finished and it's just amazing! This was so well-written and the characterizations were spot on. Definitely going on my Favourites.

Author's Response: Thank you for the very kind words. Makes me happy to think I wrote something that made someone smile. Thanks

Aurette2008.03.17 - 01:46PM4: FourSigned
OMG!! This is perfect! One gets jaded reading too much Potterfic in a row. But this made me tear up with emotion! I love your Rose! I love your Severus and Hermione! Brilliant! more plz ;)

Author's Response: Very pleased that you enjoyed it so much and that I evoked such a response with my story.No more of this one I'm afraid, unless the story gnomes drop the idea for a really good follow up in my head. Have got a couple more I'm working on though hope that suits :D

snapesnightshade2008.03.17 - 12:09PM4: FourSigned
oh this was just fantastic, great job i LOVED it. lol rose was awesome sooo cute :D

Author's Response: Wow thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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