Reviews for For All Intents and Purposes
Destine | 2019.02.01 - 01:50AM | 8: With a Cherry On Top | Signed |
I love the way that you describe his growing interest and fascination in Hermione and his dismay with himself for feeling that way. |
Somigliana | 2008.12.30 - 03:01PM | 8: With a Cherry On Top | Signed |
Huh. Here's where I admit that I am exceedingly slow and deserve to be scathingly reprimanded by Snape: Of course it's the Starglass causing the time travel, isn't it? Sigh.
Anyway. I love the tension that's developing between the two of them. |
MollysSister | 2008.09.11 - 10:05PM | 8: With a Cherry On Top | Signed |
You gave such vivid descriptions of the post office. i found myself just as facinated as Heidi |
RenitaLeandra | 2008.04.13 - 02:31PM | 8: With a Cherry On Top | Signed |
I like how you've depicted their warring emotions and feelings over one another. It's going to make the moment when they finally come together all the more rewarding. :D |
Rae7910819 | 2008.02.16 - 12:32PM | 8: With a Cherry On Top | Signed |
I can really see the Inu Yasha influence. Though I do hope Lily doesn't come forth controlled by hate and anger as a shell. That would kind of be disturbing. But I really like the line so far. Do continue and tell us all when you have the next installment up. -^^-
Author's Response: Good! I suppose those familiar w/ IY can kind of guess where I may or may not be going with things.
I send update notices to WIKTT when I post to ff.net - though lately, the chapters are up at TPP and here before I post them to ff.net. |
nelsonb | 2008.02.15 - 11:26PM | 8: With a Cherry On Top | Signed |
Lovely chapter! I really like how Severus is picking up on all the small details about "Heidi" that just don't add up. Clever boy. And the pick up line cracked me up - as for the poem (Mewlips) - downright creepy.
Author's Response: It is creepy, isn't it? Very visual and slithers off the tongue. My dad used to read that poem to me when I was young. Along with Walrus and the Carpenter, it remains one of my favorites. |
lulabelle72 | 2008.02.15 - 08:33AM | 8: With a Cherry On Top | Signed |
Yes, we women the world over have to decide- to shave or not to shave? And how much to shave? LOL. I also loved her trying to get Snape to eat sorbet. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Or wax, as the case may be. :) I think Hermione would be a sorbet kinda gal, unless under severe emotional trauma. Then, the heavy creams and chocolate are necessary. |
Lady_GaelSong | 2008.02.15 - 01:23AM | 8: With a Cherry On Top | Signed |
Ok loved the Hitchhiker's quote! Had to laugh out loud at that.
Now I am loving this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I love the Hitchhiker's Guide - I used to listen to the BBC radio show a lot as a kid. I'm in the process of transferring it to my ipod, now. ;D |
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