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Reviews for Christmas Presents Undisguised

DRoy2342822022.12.21 - 12:31AM8: Chapter 8Signed
This was really good. I thoroughly enjoyed the way you wrote the interactions between my favorite couple. Now I must read your 2nd story of their detective work.

Robby1022022.11.10 - 02:24PM8: Chapter 8Signed
Absolutely a fresh change in the SS/HG stories. I enjoyed it and look forward to reading the next one in this series.

deejay2022.07.21 - 02:39AM8: Chapter 8Signed
This is 0ne 0f the best stories I have read on this site. It helped that I am also a huge fan of Sherlock Holmes. The best of both worlds!

Javoher2022.04.16 - 10:30AM8: Chapter 8Signed
Thank you for reposting here and the additional footnotes. I’ve read it a few times (not as often as your more gentle works, the graphic gore is a bit much for me) and I appreciate this work for two reasons: it is faster paced than your longer works, as a murder mystery should be, and your version of Dumbledore is much more manipulative in this story. If any constructive criticism is desired (this was written many years ago so maybe not) it’s that I would have liked to see Neville’s motives hinted at earlier in the tale since they are complex and needed a bit more exposition for this reader. Thank you again, glad to see you’re still around this fandom!

FelixGreen2022.03.25 - 11:16AM8: Chapter 8Signed
Not my usual type, but I LOVED this!! Thank you for writing and sharing :)

Caeria2007.11.06 - 10:01AM1: Chapter 1Signed
Kind of creepy beginning and definitely not a view I would have had of Harry. But it's an different take on it on and I'm looking forward to seeing more.

septentrion2007.11.05 - 04:06PM1: Chapter 1Signed
I remember this story well. I've enjoyed it then.

Author's Response: How very kind of you! I'm in the midst of planning a sequel of sorts. 'Murder in the university' is the working title. Alas, it still only exists in my head. If I find the time, I will write about it. Thank you once again.




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