Reviews for Becoming Whole
| illnevertell | 2008.11.12 - 02:17AM | 9: Chapter 9 | Signed |
| I really liked it. Your Severus is a very interesting mix of snark and charm. I loved the morning after. I think you did a great job of normal with that. Can't wait for more! Jaimie |
| illnevertell | 2008.11.11 - 03:44PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| Great so far and I love the "pop tarts" bit. With having 3 teenage boys they are something this house is never allowed to be out of. I can't believe I haven't read this story yet. I usually read everything you write as soon as its posted. I am excited to have something new to me to read and knowing its your work makes it even better. Jaimie |
| Eridanus | 2008.06.15 - 06:46AM | 11: Epilogue | Signed |
| Very good, indeed, very good. Just the right amount of conflicts, smut, jealousy, and ... unexpected unexpectedness...
But you'll have to admit that the line "It occurred to her that he was not only a Potions master, but a master of so much more," is pretty corny. I've seen that line in a lot of parodies, and stories that... well... aren't that wellwritten to say the least. But, since I have an incredibly twisted humor, I ended up laughing my head off, saying, or rather yelling the line to myself in the most saccharine voice.
Oh! And the Skeeter-articles were spot-on! |
| Terrible Tues | 2008.06.09 - 02:42AM | 11: Epilogue | Signed |
| Lovely story. And this was great:
“I wonder if you would like to be married.” He stilled as he gazed at her hopefully. “To me,” he added unnecessarily. |
| Leona MacEwan | 2008.04.22 - 09:43AM | 11: Epilogue | Signed |
| This was nice! Thank you for the nice fiction. Glad you write for us! |
| jessirmmm | 2008.03.24 - 12:56AM | 11: Epilogue | Signed |
| Another great story from a great author! I just love all your stories! Please keep on writing! |
| jcrowell | 2008.03.22 - 12:26AM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| I always love your stories, This was beautiul! I loved the scene with Hermione blowing off the door in a jealous rage, I loved that after the craziness at the ministries she woke up and he was there with her, and I loved that 3 years later he was still there! This story was made of awesome! Thank you for sharing it! |
| SamJonesy | 2008.03.21 - 04:26AM | 8: Chapter 8 | Signed |
| “I’m right here, and you’re going to go to her?” - Love that line. Great fic! |
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