Reviews for Becoming Whole
FarmerLiz | 2007.11.12 - 02:41PM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
I like this Snape, even if he is a pain.
And I totally wasn't expecting that the plausible alternative to Hermione's custody would be freedom. I had assumed Hermione or Azkaban . . . certainly puts a different spin on things.
Author's Response: It does indeed!~ Thank you |
drakien | 2007.11.12 - 10:42AM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
EXCELLENT! I loved it when she finally blew up at Snape. Makes me wonder if he's being an exceptional git on purpose, though...maybe he WANTS to get kicked out. Hehehee!
Author's Response: Thanks! yeah, he'd love to get kicked out hahaha... |
Maggie | 2007.11.10 - 11:34AM | 2: Chapter 2 | Signed |
Hmmm.... let's see how he likes his "new home"!
Author's Response: LOL He's definitely not pleased. I'll post that shortly. |
greenwood | 2007.11.07 - 10:09PM | 2: Chapter 2 | Signed |
Wonderful, wonderful! I enjoyed how you created some tension in the court room when Snape walked in and Harry didn't stand up for him right away. The same tension carried over to the "golden trio" very smoothly. Well done chapter. I can't wait to read more and see where things are headed! ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'll have more up shortly. :) I'd hoped to show that the "trio" does have a little tension at times. |
mtnwmgirl | 2007.11.07 - 01:12PM | 2: Chapter 2 | Signed |
this is a really good start! I can't wait to see what happens!!
Author's Response: Thanks. :) |
Cinimar | 2007.11.06 - 08:08PM | 2: Chapter 2 | Signed |
wee ooo wee ooo Fantastic! Is this one going to be one of your epic ones or the short and dynamic kind? I can't wait to read the rest, either way!
Author's Response: Thank you, Cinimar! :) I'm not certain about the lenght just yet. I figure it probably won't be all that long though. My epic wip right now is Flight of the Prince. :) |
greenwood | 2007.10.22 - 10:43PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Anonymous |
Great opening chapter! I like the plot and the possibilities this has between Snape and Granger. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! More up soon. |
kittylefish | 2007.10.22 - 06:46PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
nice start. i also appreciate that ron's not an idiot (at least so far!). i'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Nah, he's gonna be all right in this one. |
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