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Reviews for Becoming Whole

winters2008.02.18 - 01:17PM6: Chapter 6Signed
Well, sometimes you have to shake the tree to get the lemons to even begin to make lemonade. I do believe she got his attention. LOL

Author's Response: So very true!

mtnwmgirl2008.02.17 - 11:06PM5: Chapter 5Signed
Thanks for another chapter. can't wait to see how they decide to make up ;)

Author's Response: ~grins wickedly~

DarlingLuna2008.02.16 - 10:19PM5: Chapter 5Signed
I like where this story is headed, I'll be excited to see more.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I appreciate this.

serpantstongue2008.02.16 - 08:24PM5: Chapter 5Signed
ooooo....that didn't go as planned. I sorta hoped that Harry would've made it into a private matter and not go running off to Skeeter of all people to exonerate Snape. But maybe they can salvage the relationship and their potion too.

Author's Response: Yes indeed~ Thank you! :)

Miz_Black2008.02.16 - 08:14PM5: Chapter 5Signed
boo hoo. all they do is argue. neither of them is acting like an adult... maybe THEY should do what harry wants ron and pansy to do. get rid of all that tension between them. heh heh great work. i'm looking forward to some hanky panky

Author's Response: Uhhuh... nothing like working out that frustration :)

SataiDelenn2008.02.14 - 06:07AM4: Chapter 4Signed
Lol. I'd wondered who Ron and Harry had been saddled with, lol. Now I know, and yeah, poor them, lol. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Fun fun :)

SataiDelenn2008.02.14 - 05:40AM3: Chapter 3Signed
SW, fine job as usual! I'm just loving this!

“Yeah, that’ll go over well,” Ron said with a snort. Changing the pitch of his voice, he mimicked Hermione, saying, “Now, Professor, remember to put the lid down after you use the toilet, or I’ll put you to bed with no dinner!” He quickly ducked the cup Hermione tossed at him. “Watch it!”

Until I got to the end of the chapter, this was my favorite line, lol. Now, yes, he needed to be told off, but, something deeper, I think, is motivating him to be so unpleasant. I'm trying to figure out what it is, if it's more than him feeling like he's already paid his debt to society, but, maybe I'm wrong.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

bellasol672008.02.13 - 09:42AM4: Chapter 4Signed
Shame on me. I neglected to see how many chapters were up, so I dive in and read away only to have it end, I hate when I'm not prepared for that! I like this plotline, I've read a few that are similar, but what I like about yours is that your Snape feels close to canon (which I always prefer), I can only hope he does not become overly warm and fuzzy...but either way, I enjoy your writing and am happy to take this ride, looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: ~smiles at you~ :) Did you get my email? Hehehe

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