Reviews for Walking in Darkness
| DRoy234282 | 2024.01.20 - 05:52AM | 8: Endings | Signed |
| Hi there. I first read this story years ago and loved it. I could not remember your name, though, so it wasn't until I came across your other story, which I also loved. Clicking on your name this time, I checked out your other story and Boom. Now I have both of them to enjoy again and again. Thanks for posting them to Ashwinder. PS: You need to keep writing, please! |
| snapefan1983 | 2017.11.07 - 02:50PM | 2: Memories and Discoveries | Signed |
| why does she not magic them closed??? Hermione climbed onto her bed, pulling the heavy drapes closed as the first ray of sunlight crept over the windowsill. “Damn,” she thought. “I didn’t close my window curtains properly. Now I have to be extra careful with the drapes around my bed.” The sight of that lonely ray of light suddenly ignited the fire of fury inside her. How pathetic that she wasn’t even able to close her own curtains! She was useless, hopeless and utterly deplorable. She was trapped in these rooms with nothing to do but research, and she had still made no progress. But even she, the newest idiot of the century should have remembered to close those bloody curtains for her own safety! The huge mound of books piled next to next to her began to dwindle as she hurled them around the room in a childish tantrum. Finally, when there were no books left, Hermione flopped back onto her pillows. Her anger having cooled sufficiently, she regretted her foolish fit. Now there was nothing to occupy her mind. Just the memories….. |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2011.04.15 - 11:20AM | 8: Endings | Signed |
| that was a brillaint story!!! brillaint story with hermione being human again!! well done for them in curing her!! as I said before Sequal please?????????????????? |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2011.04.15 - 10:13AM | 7: Revelations | Signed |
| Narcissa Malfoy is the vampire that bite hermione and etc!!! i knew it was a malfoy but didnt know which one it said that Narcissa Malfoy had vanished and untill hermione said it the vampire was female!!! and I knew this before it was said etc that it was Narcissa Malfoy!!! oh dear they are gonna have to kill Narcissa Malfoy in order to free hermiones soul!! Narcissa Malfoy husband wont be happy about all this!!!! |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2011.04.15 - 09:54AM | 8: Endings | Signed |
| sequal PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2011.04.15 - 09:49AM | 5: Contemplations | Signed |
| so hermione put her hand in sunlight why didnt it start to burn straight away? A look of confusion darted across her features before they softened into a warm smile. Hermione yawned and, before Severus could stop her, she stretched luxuriously, thrusting her bare arm directly into the shaft of sunlight slanting across the bed.
Time seemed to come to a standstill. Severus could hear his breathing echoing in his ears.
Hermione looked at her arm, the pale flesh glowing in the golden sunlight. She wrenched her arm back into the shadows, staring at it with dismay. When nothing seemed to happen, she flopped back on her pillows with relief.
Severus was not so sure. In three strides he was at her side, yanking her arm up to his inspection. As he looked, the tender flesh of her inner arm began to bubble and blister, the skin starting to smoke and char slightly, spreading outwards towards her fingers.
also will hermione lose half or all of her arm because of this? Without another glace at the stricken young woman’s face, Severus yanked her to her feet, and pulled her unceremoniously to the bathroom.
Hermione stood frozen where Severus had left her, her horror-filled gaze unable to leave her blistering, boiling arm.
Severus looked at Hermione. She was in shock. He would get nothing useful out of her now. Without another thought, Severus turned on the cold tap and shoved Hermione under the freezing water. When Hermione gasped and tried to bolt out of the shower, Severus stepped under the icy spray, grabbed hold of her injured arm, and held it up to the soothing spray.
Hermione tore her gaze from her damaged skin to the face of the man next to her. All she could see in his features was a dark, forbidding anger. When he lifted his gaze to her, she knew the anger was directed at her.
“What else is there to put on this, Miss Granger?” he asked her in an icy tone.
“Well I… uh…” She stammered, never having had the full force of is icy rage directed at her before.
“Get on with it,” he snapped, “before there is nothing of your arm left to save”
Hermione took a deep breath, collecting her shattered nerves.
“There is a special burn salve in the mirror cabinet. I made it ages ago, just in case…” Hermione’s voice trailed off as Severus stalked across the bathroom to retrieve the salve. |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2011.04.15 - 09:05AM | 2: Memories and Discoveries | Signed |
| who was the vampire that changed her into a vampire? he must have known her to call her The Chosen Ones friend and a Mudblood whore! was it malfoy? |
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