Reviews for All Strings Attached
| snapefan1983 | 2021.07.03 - 02:42PM | 1: All Strings Attached | Signed |
| Only after having sex hermione and Severus are married and he is no longer married to the other woman? That’s weird Severus kissed her lips gently before asking, "So how does it feel to be Mrs. Snape?"
Hermione grinned, "Right now I would have to say exhausting."
"Hmm... I'll take that as a compliment," he teased.
"Oh it's most definitely a compliment love," Hermione mumbled before drifting off to sleep with her head resting on his chest and her arm over his abdomen. |
| snapefan1983 | 2021.07.03 - 02:25PM | 1: All Strings Attached | Signed |
| That’s so easy to leave your husband or wife way to eat |
| loreen77 | 2014.08.31 - 10:07AM | 1: All Strings Attached | Signed |
| Shot but cute. Interesting idea for your wizard custom. I would loved to have seen the idea of this custom in more detail, how is the now ex-spouse notified? Etc. |
| MistressMalfoyGE | 2011.12.28 - 07:08AM | 1: All Strings Attached | Signed |
| I really liked this story until you had Dumbledore say 'anyways' lmao then I realised it was a crack fic well done |
| macropis | 2011.10.21 - 03:51PM | 1: All Strings Attached | Signed |
| you lost me at "anyways"... |
| verasuspense | 2010.06.29 - 08:48AM | 1: All Strings Attached | Signed |
| So, how did Olivia find out she had been replaced ? Did they just show up in Severus' quarters and tell her to start packing ? |
| Plebia | 2007.10.20 - 11:06AM | 1: All Strings Attached | Signed |
| I'll agree with the reviewer who commented on the grammar, but it was over all a good story. There is a bit of a plot hole I noticed, though. If Olivia wasn't in love with Snape and had a lover, the marriage, according to your Wizarding customs, should have already been dissolved. Sorry, I'm a nitpicker, I know. |
| Megan Consoer | 2006.09.23 - 12:04AM | 1: All Strings Attached | Signed |
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please? |
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