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Reviews for The End of Reckoning

celisnebula2007.08.30 - 05:07PM2: Part TwoSigned
SempraSeverus 2007.06.12 - 10:49PM 2: Part Two Signed [Delete] Part Two: Again you had me hot for pages… The characters are spot on, as far as I can see… You are definitely immersed deeply in their heads… The story develops like paper clad snowball, careening, gathering mass, what a rush…

Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you're thrilled!

celisnebula2007.08.30 - 05:06PM1: Part OneSigned
joannie 2007.08.18 - 11:07AM 1: Part One Signed [Delete] I see that I am not the only person who loved the line "...shock value of graphic sex and gratuitous violence could make up for shoddy writing and incomprehensible story lines were gone." That line made me chuckle. I can imagine Snape feeling that way and saying that line. The emotional scene with Albus brought tears to my eyes. When a story can make me laugh or cry, I feel the author's objective has been achieved; the feeling in the words comes across; the picture is painted. Now, I am not a prude; I do not object to reading about sex and minor violence when it is part of character or plot development. But sex and violence described for sensationalism is boring. In creative writing class, my professor stressed "writing what you know." Well written stories are a joy to read, and this story is one of those. Thank you for sharing, joannie

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.

celisnebula2007.08.30 - 05:06PM1: Part OneSigned
Subversa 2007.07.24 - 03:52AM 1: Part One Signed [Delete] I am quite intrigued by your storyline.

Author's Response: Thank you!

celisnebula2007.08.30 - 05:06PM1: Part OneSigned
mwk 2007.07.08 - 03:13PM 1: Part One Signed [Delete] "The days when the shock value of graphic sex and gratuitous violence could make up for shoddy writing and incomprehensible story lines were gone. Actually, they’d never had a place in his house, and he intended to see that they never did." An author after my own heart. Thank you for your story.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for taking the time to leave a comment.

celisnebula2007.08.30 - 05:06PM1: Part OneSigned
Darque Hart 2007.06.13 - 12:12PM 1: Part One Signed [Delete] Great first chapter. Had to laugh at, "value of graphic sex and gratuitous violence could make up for shoddy writing..." Gads, I've read so many horrid chapters because someone wanted to write 'smut'. Once they got their smut-filled chapter done, they write no more (thank goodness!) On the other hand, I had a little cry with Severus when he broke down in Albus' lap and cried. Our poor lad, so put upon!

Author's Response: I cried when I wrote that scene. I'm thrilled that it moved you. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

celisnebula2007.08.30 - 05:05PM1: Part OneSigned
Pookah 2007.06.13 - 10:23AM 1: Part One Signed [Delete] Wow! I have read some very bad stories, and some good ones, where the time frame is like this one, all back and forth. But this one is really great. I am very impressed. Thank you for sharing this with us! I will finish reading this when I can.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

celisnebula2007.08.30 - 05:05PM1: Part OneSigned
Bambu 2007.06.12 - 11:01PM 1: Part One Signed [Delete] It's usually very difficult to write a story where so many timelines are woven simultaneously, however, your story -- once I got used to it -- works very well. I'm quite intrigued.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

celisnebula2007.08.30 - 05:05PM1: Part OneSigned
SempraSeverus 2007.06.12 - 10:47PM 1: Part One Signed [Delete] Part One: What a mind bender… It was like riding a roller coaster while blindfolded…I could not see where it was going, but certainly could feel the gravitational pull of it… I really enjoy that feeling by the way…

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

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