Reviews for The Love You Take
| Pendaren | 2024.01.12 - 10:43PM | 21: Chapter 21: Prostration | Signed |
| This story is dripping with hotness AND plot. It is amazing. It pulls you in, you write so well. Only one nitpick that threatened my immersion is the whole "our father's house" scene in this chapter. They are at Malfoy Manor, NOT Cygnus Blacks'. Bella and Andromeda (and Narcissa) are Black Sisters per the Tapestry in OotP. The scene implies that Lucius is their full blood brother and not just Brother-in-Law and that threatens the wonderful immersion you created. |
| sammypenny | 2021.12.06 - 10:15PM | 28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make | Signed |
| Amazing story! Wonderful and incredibly sexy writing. Thank you. |
| coolarrow7 | 2021.03.28 - 05:48PM | 28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make | Signed |
| Wow! I loved this story! |
| sandpiper | 2021.02.26 - 03:14PM | 17: Chapter 17: Confession | Signed |
| With all the perturbations of this story the hardest for me to take is his violations of her mind. It is an ultimate betrayal, and it is very hard for me to believe that she would react so calmly to it time and time again. The sanctity of our minds is a given, doesn't matter if you can do it, absolutely nothing gives one the right to invade someone's mind like that. And I don't believe Hermione would forgive it so easily even if she did already love him. |
| Hello Kitty | 2020.05.23 - 04:16PM | 28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make | Signed |
| I love this story so much! I don't think I will ever tire of reading it! |
| PlaidPooka | 2020.04.26 - 10:52PM | 28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make | Signed |
| One of my favorite stories in all the Potterverse. |
| Pixie Dust | 2017.11.01 - 05:45PM | 28: Chapter 28: The Love You Make | Signed |
| This story is simply amazing. |
| joannie | 2017.03.22 - 10:35PM | 12: Chapter 12: Confusion | Signed |
| Subversa, your stories have always been some of my most favourite. I think I started this story a long time ago, but just now found it again. I thought I was the only one who felt the pain of Deathly Hallows. At the time I could not finish reading it and put the book down for a quite a while. In the end I think I managed getting through it in a daze of sorts. This is a beautiful story. I love the way they are both changing. There are so many little touches you added to make it intriguing and interesting. Thank you, joannie. |
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