Reviews for As Soon As I Belong
Jong_Kahn | 2015.03.11 - 10:57AM | 7: Chapter 7: The Failure of Logic | Signed |
Another well-written chapter, another "10". |
natalia31462 | 2012.04.10 - 04:33PM | 7: Chapter 7: The Failure of Logic | Signed |
Not bad at all. However, the only character that did not seem stiff and a bit forced was Vicktor Krum. He was truly loving toward Hermione and of such a gentle spirit. I hope with time you be as much at ease with other characters as you were with Krum.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing one of my first HP stories. I hope that over the years my writing has improved and resulted in less stiff characters. |
jenidralph | 2012.01.30 - 01:24PM | 7: Chapter 7: The Failure of Logic | Signed |
Of course, he does not "luff" her.
Author's Response: :D
Glad you liked that! |
sunsethill | 2007.08.22 - 07:07PM | 7: Chapter 7: The Failure of Logic | Signed |
Hermione and Victor have their work cut out for them. I like the addition of making things a little more ambiguous as to what is required--an act of love.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the ambiguity of it. |
alphafemale | 2007.08.21 - 11:19PM | 7: Chapter 7: The Failure of Logic | Signed |
This was a nice transitional chapter. I am curious to see what happens next. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be getting uploaded to the queue shortly. |
myst_angel | 2007.08.21 - 11:13PM | 7: Chapter 7: The Failure of Logic | Signed |
Aww, come on Snape. Stop being such a git and use that intelligence of yours! Great idea for the story by the way =)
Author's Response: Thanks! Though I can't take credit for the basic idea, as I was writing to a prompt for the sshg_exchange. The prompt will follow the last chapter. |
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