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Reviews for As Soon As I Belong

Jong_Kahn2015.03.11 - 10:57AM7: Chapter 7: The Failure of LogicSigned
Another well-written chapter, another "10".

natalia314622012.04.10 - 04:33PM7: Chapter 7: The Failure of LogicSigned
Not bad at all. However, the only character that did not seem stiff and a bit forced was Vicktor Krum. He was truly loving toward Hermione and of such a gentle spirit. I hope with time you be as much at ease with other characters as you were with Krum.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing one of my first HP stories. I hope that over the years my writing has improved and resulted in less stiff characters.

jenidralph2012.01.30 - 01:24PM7: Chapter 7: The Failure of LogicSigned
Of course, he does not "luff" her.

Author's Response: :D Glad you liked that!

sunsethill2007.08.22 - 07:07PM7: Chapter 7: The Failure of LogicSigned
Hermione and Victor have their work cut out for them. I like the addition of making things a little more ambiguous as to what is required--an act of love.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the ambiguity of it.

alphafemale2007.08.21 - 11:19PM7: Chapter 7: The Failure of LogicSigned
This was a nice transitional chapter. I am curious to see what happens next. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be getting uploaded to the queue shortly.

myst_angel2007.08.21 - 11:13PM7: Chapter 7: The Failure of LogicSigned
Aww, come on Snape. Stop being such a git and use that intelligence of yours! Great idea for the story by the way =)

Author's Response: Thanks! Though I can't take credit for the basic idea, as I was writing to a prompt for the sshg_exchange. The prompt will follow the last chapter.




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