Reviews for A Trial of the Heart
|JamesandLily4ever||2008.07.30 - 05:31PM||8: Vocat||Signed |
|^_^ Indeed, I must agree with Rowena. Then again, I am hoping that Hermione and Severus will finish the school year as friends and then... kiss and make-up. *giggles* Wonderful chapter, though. ;] 10/10!|
Author's Response: Hmm I don't know about friendship.
|vaila||2007.08.09 - 11:33AM||8: Vocat||Signed |
|The conversation was outstanding! The heroes played naturally. I liked that Hermione prefered his company to the ball - maybe next time he will attend the ball and it will be easier for her. And the wine - maybe some day he will invite her on a chat with a glass of wine - when she is of age probably. The pace of the story is to my liking - the pace of updating - unnecessary to say - is not. ;)|
Author's Response: Thanks once more for being such a great supporter. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Your comment about the wine will be answered in the next chapter... which is stuck in the murky mires of queue at the present mire.
Author's Response: Chapter 9 is up now and 10 is in the queue.
|Maddie||2007.08.07 - 01:44PM||8: Vocat||Signed |
|Oh no, she looks like an old flame of his. That always gives me a sinking feeling. If they do end up together and Hermione finds out, will she wonder, "Does he think of her when he looks at me?"|
Author's Response: Yes the old flame look-a-like can set up for future problems... but did you really think Severus was into Elizabeth? I mean,just by the way he dismissed her; doesn't his reaction seem odd?
Author's Response: Next chapter is up, check it out.
|Pookah||2007.08.07 - 03:46AM||8: Vocat||Signed |
|Thanks for this story. I want to see more of Rowena, especially Rowena interacting with her brother. Good job.|
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment and support.
|barbarade||2007.08.06 - 05:49PM||8: Vocat||Signed |
|Enjoyed it and hope things progress soon.|
Author's Response: Thank you. This chapter marks the end of part 1 (infatuation), and the beginning of part 2 which should be alot of fun for you readers.
|septentrion||2007.08.06 - 02:05PM||8: Vocat||Signed |
|What is with this charming Severus? I'm curious to see how he will react to Hermione the next day.|
Author's Response: One could attribute his charming-ness to a rather large helping of wine.
Author's Response: Chapter 9 is up for your reading pleasure.