Reviews for Mannequin
| Jong_Kahn | 2013.06.12 - 07:06AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Sorry you only have the one chapter here. It's an intriguing beginning with the makings of an interesting story. One error in the paragraph three paragraphs up from the end, middle sentence. In the phrase "...saw that the dim light in the hallway beyond the glass had been distinguished", you need the word "extinguished" instead. Other than that, a perfect chapter. Too bad it probably won't be finished. Thanks for the work you did, though, it was appreciated. I'll give you a "9" for your efforts. |
| MollysSister | 2009.03.12 - 02:04PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Here I was searching for Voldy wins stories when yours came up in the "randomly selected" section. How cool is that. I very much enjoyed the muesum. Very creepy.
))))wonders off to see what else you have written |
| SamusAran | 2007.09.13 - 07:24AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Well, that's quite an interesting story. Very unique. |
| lilbitbord | 2007.08.01 - 07:56AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| This is interesting. I don't think I ever read a story quite like this. I can't wait to see where you take it. |
| kali | 2007.07.31 - 02:24PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Oooh, I'm excited about where you're going with this! Can't wait to read the next installment. |
| Drinking chocolate | 2007.07.30 - 07:01PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Completely weird and original! And thoroughly creepy. I'm interested to know what happens next. Hmm, a Hermione who has to do as thorough and exhausting an act as Snape had to do throughout the series? |
| hallowsnape | 2007.07.30 - 01:42AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| As most of the story lines in the entire sycophent hex archive are now totally without canon compliancy ti Deathly Hallows, I wouldn't worry about it, but this is one of the more creative crossroads of Snape/Granger fiction I've ever takena chance on. Keep writing, for I am hooked. |
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