Reviews for I Am Your Dentist
snapeslover1970 | 2004.07.20 - 08:11PM | 1: I Am Your Dentist | Signed |
This is great! I laughed how Severus thought just going to the dentist was far a worse a type of torture than the terrible things he had done to people when he was a death eater! Well written and very funny along the way, very well done. |
SusanPW | 2004.07.20 - 08:11PM | 1: I Am Your Dentist | Anonymous |
I absolutely love the comparison of the dentist to torture. And the concept of Severus trying Muggle dentistry is great.
Some little changes: the line beginning "Afrad to pick..." should have "looked" not "look" and it's "Dental aide." You need the "e" on the end |
Binah Tiferet | 2004.07.20 - 02:17PM | 1: I Am Your Dentist | Anonymous |
I found this fic one night by accident and am so glad I did! I was holding my leeping 6 month old daughter and having a rather hard time trying not to laugh! I really enjoyed it ... great job! |
jnpsmama | 2004.07.20 - 02:11PM | 1: I Am Your Dentist | Signed |
**Dies**
That was so funny. I worked as a dental office assistant for two years, and I don't know how many times I seated a patient to hear them mumble something about 'the torture chamber'.
The growling stomach and the conversation is right on. Oh, I love this.
Except plaque is soft, tartar is removed by srcaping. And bleeding gums means gum disease and root planing! |
Briseis | 2004.06.13 - 10:36PM | 1: I Am Your Dentist | Signed |
This story was so funny! As someone who is terrified of going to the dentist (thank God I found sleep dentistry!), I knew exaclty how poor Snape felt! |
SecretAgentSmutGirl | 2004.02.28 - 01:44PM | 1: I Am Your Dentist | Anonymous |
My goodness, that was hysterical. The dentist is a horrid place, and the scenario of that being the 'meet the father', whooboy. Poor Snape. |
liquidscissors | 2004.02.18 - 07:45PM | 1: I Am Your Dentist | Signed |
*splutter* |
LeongMingYu | 2004.02.17 - 09:35PM | 1: I Am Your Dentist | Anonymous |
Original and very well done! Nice descriptive work! hahaha! |
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