Reviews for As Soon As I Belong
Corylea | 2017.08.21 - 01:47PM | 2: Chapter 2: The Morning After | Signed |
Loved the line, "He slipped into the bathroom to dress, narrowly avoiding what appeared to be a large orange bottlebrush in his path, which was apparently attached to a cat that was looking at him intently." |
marisamarinee | 2015.06.15 - 06:01PM | 2: Chapter 2: The Morning After | Signed |
Interesting. So neither of them put up the dark enchantments? 😂 |
Jong_Kahn | 2015.03.11 - 09:59AM | 2: Chapter 2: The Morning After | Signed |
I like the adult level of the writing here. Nicely done. |
greenwood | 2014.05.03 - 10:03PM | 2: Chapter 2: The Morning After | Signed |
Oh this is going to be good! They both think that the "dark" spells on her flat were the work of the other!! Someone else is protecting her? Hummmm.....
Author's Response: Thanks, very glad you're enjoying it! |
jenidralph | 2012.01.30 - 12:47PM | 2: Chapter 2: The Morning After | Signed |
Who set the extra wards? Surely not Crookshanks... although, that cat/kneazle always has a trick or two up his sleeve.. er, fur. Great story!!
Author's Response: Nope, not Crookshanks. That will be revealed in later chapters. Glad you're enjoying, and thanks for reviewing! |
Marianne | 2007.09.04 - 09:19AM | 2: Chapter 2: The Morning After | Signed |
Additional wards?Interesting. I will definitely read on; I like your style..
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it and that you got hooked in! |
SataiDelenn | 2007.08.22 - 02:51AM | 2: Chapter 2: The Morning After | Signed |
Hmm... Well, I will certainly read on to find out just who put those extra wards on the window and door. First though, I am intrigued with this story. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're intrigued and planning to keep on reading. I'll be uploading the next chapter to the queue shortly. |
amy skydancer | 2007.07.25 - 08:32PM | 2: Chapter 2: The Morning After | Signed |
hmmm.... third party intervention? or was an overly-pariniod person exceedingly inebriated the night before ( yes I know...this review is RIDDLED with spelling errors... need hang-over-potion.......)
Author's Response: Heh. Hope you found your potion and are feeling better! Interesting wording there. Thanks for the review! |
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