Reviews for As Soon As I Belong
breastlady | 2015.09.01 - 12:21AM | 4: Chapter 4: Seeking Answers Elsewhere | Signed |
This may be my 3rd time reading this story and I have the curse or blessing of terrible short term memory. So. Even though I think this is my 3rd read I couldn't remember what had been done to Severus until I just read it again. I only just remembered that they do indeed go to Bulgaria and I am reasonably certain that they find a way to break this curse. The most important thing is that Hermione and Severus have a romantic attachment. That was why I read this the first 2 times. Let's read on to find out if any more comes of this relationship than the first night fling. I don't remember the end except that I don't think Snape dies. Great story so far! Cheers! |
marisamarinee | 2015.06.15 - 06:01PM | 2: Chapter 2: The Morning After | Signed |
Interesting. So neither of them put up the dark enchantments? 😂 |
Jong_Kahn | 2015.03.11 - 11:14AM | 11: Epilogue | Signed |
I'd like to think that Severus' "Perhaps" got to be modified into more enthusiasm after more 'experiments'. A very well done story, very much in character for everyone involved. Thank you. |
Jong_Kahn | 2015.03.11 - 11:10AM | 10: Chapter 10: Evaluating the Results | Signed |
When even the cat knows something's wrong when there's no Severus for Hermione--that's a situation that's got to change. Come on, Severus--figure it out! |
Jong_Kahn | 2015.03.11 - 11:05AM | 9: Chapter 9: A Worthy Attempt | Signed |
Nice. Very nice. |
Jong_Kahn | 2015.03.11 - 11:02AM | 8: Chapter 8: A Gleam of Hope | Signed |
Nice deferral of his paranoia by Hermione; nice awareness by Severus--especially his newfound willingness to go ahead! |
Jong_Kahn | 2015.03.11 - 10:57AM | 7: Chapter 7: The Failure of Logic | Signed |
Another well-written chapter, another "10". |
Jong_Kahn | 2015.03.11 - 10:53AM | 6: Chapter 6: How Far to Go for a Cure? | Signed |
"That the pain might not be physical never entered his mind." Powerful last line--well done. |
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