Reviews for The Waiting Game
| HermioneFan21 | 2011.09.13 - 11:08PM | 4: Day 1/2 -- Part II | Signed |
| so the killer isnt ron?? “I found a short blond hair in the wound tract during my exploration. It has to be the killer’s. The hair was left after the throat was slashed, and the paramedic who pronounced it had brown hair.”
“And does it match to anything else?”
“Yes. The hair is a match to the sperm sample we found.”
“We have the killer and the lover.”
“Yes, we do.”
if they have the killer and the lover why dont they arrect the guy who did it?? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2011.09.13 - 10:42PM | 3: Day 1/2 -- Part I | Signed |
| severus was saked?? long before his undue sacking,
and why is it undue? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2011.09.13 - 10:28PM | 2: Day 0/1 | Signed |
| are they wearing gloves while on a crime sceen?? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2011.09.13 - 10:23PM | 2: Day 0/1 | Signed |
| “Are you the lot from the Ministry?”
Severus turned, spotting a bulky-looking Auror in green robes gesturing towards them with the tip of his wand. “Yes.”
“Then I think you’d better start over here,” he said, holding open the door to what appeared to be the bedroom.
Hermione and Severus pushed forward, walking past the Auror and into the room. She let out a low whistle as she surveyed the scene.
what the Auror is gonna take there word? dont severus and hermione have ID's on them to show them WHO they are??? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2011.09.13 - 09:56PM | 1: Day 0 | Signed |
| and since when is severus a police man of sorts and not a potions master?? a teacher?? |
| HermioneFan21 | 2011.09.13 - 09:55PM | 1: Day 0 | Signed |
| who is the naked dead girl?? you didnt name her!!! and why if its in the muggle world why is severus and draco getting involved in the case? is the naked dead girl a witch?? |
| Celithrathien | 2009.10.11 - 05:31AM | 4: Day 1/2 -- Part II | Signed |
| I sincerely enjoyed this story when it was first posted. Please continue it if you can. I'm very bad about updating stories myself but I have faith that you won't abandon this one :) |
| cporter | 2008.10.25 - 03:21PM | 4: Day 1/2 -- Part II | Signed |
| I don't know if you are still writing on this but please do so! this is really good stuff and one of my fave shows is CSI: Miami.........:) |
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