Reviews for A Trial of the Heart
|septentrion||2007.07.01 - 11:56AM||2: Reevaluation||Signed |
|Not, it's not a cliché, it's a cliffie, diminutive of cliff-hanger i.e. you've stop the chapter at a crucial moment.|
Author's Response: At okay.. sorry my brain is not entirely functioning at the moment. yes I liked dropping that chapter off where I did. It felt right to me.
|barbarade||2007.07.01 - 05:40AM||2: Reevaluation||Signed |
|I hope Hermione will join Severus's sister so that he will know that they both want him to be free and not be alone.
I want to know what his sister said that made him cry???|
Author's Response: You have not begun to be near seeing the end of Severus' sister. She is going to be a pivotal character. You will find out what she said in due time.
|septentrion||2007.07.01 - 04:50AM||2: Reevaluation||Signed |
|That was kind of a cliffie. I hope to hear from you soon.|
Author's Response: Umm sorry to ask this, but did you mean clichee? I suppose that it is.
|Maggie||2007.06.30 - 09:35PM||2: Reevaluation||Signed |
|Very well done, don't leave us waiting too long for the verdict.|
Author's Response: Thank you.