Reviews for A Trial of the Heart
|JamesandLily4ever||2008.07.30 - 04:57PM||1: The Beginning||Signed |
|Ron, the cool unfeeling git, why'd he have to say that?! Anyway, you're keeping him in character. Despite that... I hope that Sev gets out fine. *hopes*
10/10! Wonderful beginning chapter, dudette. ^_^|
Author's Response: Haha many thanks.
|vaila||2007.07.04 - 09:24AM||1: The Beginning||Signed |
|Uterly brilliant beginning! I just can't wait to read the rest. I fear I will read the remaining two posted chapters too quickly and then I will have to wait long for the fourth so do hurry. And satisfy your readers by updating soon!|
Author's Response: I'm updating as quickly as possible. The fourth chapter is in cue (as it is being screened).
I'm glad you enjoyed the begining.
Author's Response: Fourth Chapter is up. Read away. The fifth is in cue for screening by admins. However they're be no new additions between this friday and next monday as I'll be on holidays.
|Formeandmygirls2||2007.06.30 - 10:33AM||1: The Beginning||Signed |
|Very strong beginning. I can't wait to see what happens next!|
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm having slight issues getting the rest of the story through the screening process right now, but hopefully it will be up soon.
|Maggie||2007.06.29 - 01:10PM||1: The Beginning||Signed |
Author's Response: Thank you.
|amsev||2007.06.29 - 02:13AM||1: The Beginning||Signed |
|Very intense, emotional first chapter. Wow. I look forward to reading more!|
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. The second is on it's way to being improved and I'm having Chapters 3 and 4 beta-ed right now.
|septentrion||2007.06.28 - 07:28AM||1: The Beginning||Signed |
This Rowana looks like a very interesting character.|
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your feedback.
|barbarade||2007.06.28 - 05:40AM||1: The Beginning||Signed |
|Wow, intense. Severus has a sister. Hopefully her testimony frees Severus and I am curious to see how Hermione and Severus get together.|
Author's Response: Yeah I've been concocting the character of Severus's sister for a while.
|raj||2007.06.28 - 02:26AM||1: The Beginning||Signed |
|Wow, that's quite a first chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more of this story... soon, perhaps? |
Author's Response: Very soon. I'm working on Chapter two as we speak. Thanks for the great review!
Author's Response: Chapter Two is now up, but I think it's still being screened because I can't access it yet. Chapter 3 is in the works.