Reviews for A Trial of the Heart
Maggie | 2007.07.27 - 10:26PM | 7: October | Signed |
Hmmmm..... Well is Rowena going "fix-up" her darling brother and send him up to the ball.
Author's Response: Hmmm you'll have to wait and see. |
greenwood | 2007.07.17 - 12:39PM | 6: Wounds | Anonymous |
I really like the introduction to Rowena Snape in this story. I really like her and think she is such a good "opposite" to Severus. Harmione seems such a "child" in this story with a true school girl crush. Having Severus' older sister to compair to makes Harmione seem more a child especially with her still in school and hanging with her mates. I like the story a lot but the golden trio seem to have not been touched by thier encounter with death from the war. It' s as though they were placed back in their 4 year or something. Harmione needs to grow up before Severus could even think of her as a "more than friend" if this is where it is suppose to head. The plot of this story is really good though so I hope you still keep going with it.
Author's Response: Thanks for such a detailed response. I agree that Hermione still has to do much growing, before she and Severus can have a chance. That will definately emerge in the story very soon. Thank you for your appreciation of Rowena. |
vaila | 2007.07.17 - 03:31AM | 6: Wounds | Signed |
Nice chapter - what a duel. And Hermione helping Snape! But she is not the one who ensured his release - there were a lot of people who voted for him. Hermione just happened to be the last.
Author's Response: Perhaps, she was the last, but she broke the final tie, which if she hadn't would have sent him to Azkaban or worse. |
Maddie | 2007.07.17 - 12:19AM | 6: Wounds | Signed |
Exciting duel. Poor Severus still feels he must suffer. He just does not want to be rescued. Perhaps only his sister can reach him at the moment.
Author's Response: Severus definately cannot forgive himself. As to who will reach him, you'll have to wait and see. |
Maggie | 2007.07.16 - 11:15PM | 6: Wounds | Signed |
Siblings fighting, makes me glad my children aren't magical.
Author's Response: Haha. Yeah magical children would be dangerous to your home. |
ladyluv | 2007.07.07 - 01:17AM | 5: Surprises | Signed |
The 1st 5 chapters are very interesting. I cannot wait to see where you take us. Snape's sister is a good character. Cannot wait for chapter 6
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your support.
Author's Response: Chapter Six is now up. |
septentrion | 2007.07.06 - 12:10PM | 5: Surprises | Signed |
Me thinks that the ball being announced while Hermione is not there will have consequences...
Author's Response: Not entirely, however it was a bit of a symbalic move on my part. |
vaila | 2007.07.06 - 11:19AM | 5: Surprises | Signed |
Balls again! WOW! I just can't wait to read this! I knew it! I just knew the new professor will be Rowena. But how will they call her exactly? Professor Rowena or just Rowena? I think it should be the first one as the second one is far too informal. Am I right! I am curious. Does Snape know Hermione like him? He seems to be surprised that she is watching him. Maybe he can put two and two tgether and find out. So the first ball is on Halloween - so 31st of Oct - very very soon! I am looking forward to it! I see chapter six is on the queue. Is this story finished altready?
Author's Response: I believe Rowena would let her call them either. She seems rather informal most of the time, however I think it will be Professor Rowena from most students. The story planning is all finished; i have a big notebook full of writters notes on plot, I have yet to type it all up though.
Author's Response: Part six is now up. |
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