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Reviews for A Trial of the Heart

Maddie2007.08.16 - 04:20AM9: Growing UpSigned
Rowena seems to be on a digging expedition. If his sister approves, he won't stand a chance.

Author's Response: Haha. I always love reading your reviews. You have such a fresh way of saying what's going through my mind... we must be telepathically linked or something.

barbarade2007.08.15 - 05:44AM9: Growing UpSigned
Wonderful update. Thought is was cute that Severus can make Hermione so clumsy. Anxious to see why Rowena wanted to have a drink with Hermione. Perhaps reveal some more about Severus to her??? Update soon.

Author's Response: Haha. Glad you liked that part. Rowena's intentions in inviting Hermione are mostly due to the fact that they are similar (intelligent, high magical abilities). Next chapter is already in queue.

vaila2007.08.15 - 05:17AM9: Growing UpSigned
I wish I had heard the whole conversation between Rowena and Hermione. Why did it stop before it began? And why is all this interest in Hermione? Does Rowena knows? I wish the chapters were longer to compensate the long waiting - but if the admins weren't so slow maybe it wouldn't be a problem at all.

Author's Response: I really have to tempt and tease you with the conversations (sorry evil writer syndrome). Besides, as I imagined it, it wasn't a very important conversation. Rowena might know or she might not. I think that Rowena and Hermione are both very alike (intelligent and brave) and Rowena has taken a genuine interest in her as a friend. My appologies about the waiting... I do wish it went faster myself. There are some longer chapters coming but for now I'm just trying to set up the pieces so when a certain chapter is posted, it hits the readers like a brick wall.

vaila2007.08.09 - 11:33AM8: VocatSigned
The conversation was outstanding! The heroes played naturally. I liked that Hermione prefered his company to the ball - maybe next time he will attend the ball and it will be easier for her. And the wine - maybe some day he will invite her on a chat with a glass of wine - when she is of age probably. The pace of the story is to my liking - the pace of updating - unnecessary to say - is not. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks once more for being such a great supporter. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Your comment about the wine will be answered in the next chapter... which is stuck in the murky mires of queue at the present mire.

Author's Response: Chapter 9 is up now and 10 is in the queue.

Maddie2007.08.07 - 01:44PM8: VocatSigned
Oh no, she looks like an old flame of his. That always gives me a sinking feeling. If they do end up together and Hermione finds out, will she wonder, "Does he think of her when he looks at me?"

Author's Response: Yes the old flame look-a-like can set up for future problems... but did you really think Severus was into Elizabeth? I mean,just by the way he dismissed her; doesn't his reaction seem odd?

Author's Response: Next chapter is up, check it out.

Pookah2007.08.07 - 03:46AM8: VocatSigned
Thanks for this story. I want to see more of Rowena, especially Rowena interacting with her brother. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment and support.

barbarade2007.08.06 - 05:49PM8: VocatSigned
Enjoyed it and hope things progress soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. This chapter marks the end of part 1 (infatuation), and the beginning of part 2 which should be alot of fun for you readers.

septentrion2007.08.06 - 02:05PM8: VocatSigned
What is with this charming Severus? I'm curious to see how he will react to Hermione the next day.

Author's Response: One could attribute his charming-ness to a rather large helping of wine.

Author's Response: Chapter 9 is up for your reading pleasure.

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