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| JamesandLily4ever | 2008.07.30 - 04:57PM | 1: The Beginning | Signed |
| Ron, the cool unfeeling git, why'd he have to say that?! Anyway, you're keeping him in character. Despite that... I hope that Sev gets out fine. *hopes*
10/10! Wonderful beginning chapter, dudette. ^_^ Author's Response: Haha many thanks. | |||
| pstibbons | 2008.07.30 - 01:19PM | 12: Dance With Me | Signed |
| Fun chapter. Thanks. Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I hope to have a new chapter up soon. (No more of this months between updating stuff ;-) ) | |||
| Sampdoria | 2008.07.30 - 04:32AM | 12: Dance With Me | Signed |
| I am so happy to have found your story, I really like it! I like how you have given Severus a sister, not to mention what a lovely sister. He is usually given such a solitude life, I am very glad you changed that! I also like how you emphatize the maturity of Hermiones mind compared to Harry and Ron. Not only is girls usually more mature than boys at that age, but Ron and Harry is so extremely immature for boys their age:-)) I love the friendship between Rowena and Hermione. Though her name could imply Ravenclaw, I sense a Slytherin approach in her on how to get her brother and Hermione together.
All in all, a great story and I look forward to read more!!! Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's reviews like yours that really keep me going. Rowena's name partially implies Ravenclaw, but theres a lot of depth to her character that will be explored in the next few chapters. Author's Response: By any stroke of luck do you BETA read for punctuation and grammar? I really need a BETA to get the next chapter out. | |||
| Snapes Hot 69 | 2008.01.19 - 10:56PM | 11: Brown Paper Packages | Signed |
| Write like the wind because I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Thank you very much... I'm trying to update but this chapter is being a dreadful pain in the butt. Author's Response: Chapter 12 is finally up! So sorry about the agonizingly long wait!!! | |||
| barbarade | 2007.12.07 - 09:28AM | 11: Brown Paper Packages | Signed |
| Still anxiously awaiting for the answer to my previous question.
What did Rowena say to Severus and why did he burst into tears? Author's Response: The answer to your question will emerge between Chapters 14 and 17. Trust me.. it's well worth the wait. Also, many appologies for not updating so faithfully lately. Author's Response: Chapter 12 is finally up! So sorry about the agonizingly long wait!!! Author's Response: By any stroke of luck do you BETA read for punctuation and grammar? I really need a BETA to get the next chapter out. | |||
| ElectricBloo | 2007.09.13 - 04:50PM | 11: Brown Paper Packages | Signed |
| Your portrayal of Rowena as matchmaker flowed throughout this chapter and gave a successful ease to one's belief that she was a character capable of doing so. Cheers for posting. Author's Response: Thank you very much for the continued feedback. Rowena is indeed capable but matchmaking is so very dependent on Severus and Hermione... so it could have some complications. | |||
| Pookah | 2007.09.13 - 03:46PM | 11: Brown Paper Packages | Signed |
| I am enjoying this so much. I love Rowena. I'm surprised Hermione didn't mention the gown to Rowena, unless she suspects Rowena sent it. Thanks in advance for the next chapter, already in queue. Author's Response: Thank you for the comment and support. Author's Response: Chapter 12 is finally up! So sorry about the agonizingly long wait!!! | |||
| pstibbons | 2007.09.12 - 02:31PM | 11: Brown Paper Packages | Anonymous |
| Nice job. Also glad Hermione's moving away from Harry and Ron ; they would only keep her down. Rowena's an excellent OC. Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you're enjpying the plot so far and especially my OC. Author's Response: Chapter 12 is finally up! So sorry about the agonizingly long wait!!! | |||
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