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Jong_Kahn2013.06.29 - 04:56AM1: LoyaltySigned
I was surprised Mundungus addressed Hermione by her first name; it implies a greater closeness or familiarity than I would've thought they shared. Still, I enjoyed seeing Severus and Hermione on the same side against the thief. Good!

loreen772011.08.07 - 05:14PM1: LoyaltySigned
Nice job

hana 3332007.06.25 - 11:28AM1: LoyaltyAnonymous
Veritaserum is poisonous? and FLetcher is on the Voldemorts side?

Author's Response: Veritaserum isn't, but the poison he mixed with it was. Fletcher may or may not be a spy in my mind. *shrugs* His behavior is certainly suspicious.

blackaces9242007.06.25 - 02:12AM1: LoyaltySigned
awesome stuff! letting him know that he's right only at the end ;)

Author's Response: *grins* Thanks :)

Maddie2007.06.24 - 10:26PM1: LoyaltySigned
I loved it. Snape is wicked and does all the talking and torture, while Hermione communicates so much just by meeting Severus's gaze. Is your implication that Mundungus is a Death Eater or at least serves Voldemort?

Author's Response: Thanks. I think that canon Mundungus might, and at the very least needs to explain his strange behavior including abandoning his post etc. Either he is also a spy, or something worse is going on there. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Time Waster2007.06.24 - 09:10PM1: LoyaltySigned
Very clever story and nicely written. Severus is in perfect character and the suggestion of love between SS and HG is lovely. Thanks.




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