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barton2015.11.15 - 09:12PM1: Signed
The dream-trance concept is neat. I like how you show (not tell) with HG experiencing the colors during her own transfiguration work. How will HG and DM build a friendship? How will she work with the study group personalities? When will she wise up about Ron? keep writing!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm pleased you took the time to read this; I'm actively rewriting it, but the parts you've enjoyed are being retained (I like to think I'm making it better...) I hope to have revisions done sometime around Christmas -- i.e., once I'm finished with Quando Omni -- and then it'll be on to new content.

loreen772015.11.11 - 12:02AM1: Signed
I am glad I found your writing. I enjoy your style and find your Snape well done. I love the interaction between Hermione and Draco. I know you are revisiting this story and look forward to updates soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you appreciate the characterisation -- it really tickles me pink to hear that kind of feedback; I should be back to revisions here by the end of the month (or a bit sooner if I get Quando Omni wrestled out of the way before then). Thanks for reading!

loreen772015.11.09 - 09:33PM1: Signed
Nice start. I like Minerva' POV and Ron prattling on like that makes it feel very authentic.

Author's Response: Aw, glad you liked this old thing. I've been doing massive revisions on it; you should probably read those (they're up on fanfiction.net, and slowly coming online at The Petulant Poetess). I'll be posting them here once I've caught up to the story, and started in on new content.

Jong_Kahn2015.05.02 - 12:52AM1: Signed
I was very glad to see the update note on your author's page (Best thing, the date: April 2015!), saying you WERE coming back to this! YAY!! You mentioned a rewrite. My fear is you will re-do the chapters we already have here, when what we're hungry for is new NEW chapters! But I/we will be grateful for any attention, and shower you with love and appreciation for coming back to us here! Thank you!! And here's a "10"--there'll be more of those, never fear!

Author's Response: Soooo. First off: yes, I'm around. I'm actively working on rewrites, and hope to post all of them at once, followed shortly by the next chapter. Working on this story has been difficult; trying to reconcile where I wanted to go with it and the many plotholes in canon has been a challenge. A couple years ago, I took a hard look at what I was writing, and knew that I needed to write more up-front context, and resolve some tangles that would otherwise interfere with downstream plot. And that's been a pile of work. Admittedly, I've also been more than distracted with a dissertation, which shows no signs of writing itself. Finally, I'm more than a bit worried that this fandom is dead (or gasping its last), and my not being a validated author on this site may not allow me to post updates. If that winds up being the case, I'll certainly put things up elsewhere, and link to them. In short: not dead, just delayed. But ACTUALLY writing stuff.

Author's Response: Revisions are going up at fanfiction.net first, so that the continuity of this stuff isn't buggered all to hell for weeks on end. Thought I'd let you know.

Jong_Kahn2015.05.01 - 11:27PM1: Signed
So I left a previous review five and a half years ago! Believe it or not, "The tomato and zucchini soup was peppery, and went well with the crusty rye bread that she spread with chevre. She fixed herself a cup of coffee for good measure," is the line that made me think I had already read it. That lunch sounded good to me then, and still does! Another fine chapter.

Author's Response: LOL! Delighted to hear it sounds tasty (and that my detailing catches in your mind -- always a good sign when doing descriptions)

Jong_Kahn2015.05.01 - 10:52PM1: Signed
"Surely having Malfoy in her debt was of more immediate personal use than winning thirty more points for Gryffindor." Could it be our Hermione might just start thinking a bit more like a (gasp) Slytherin?! Good for her! Good chapter, too.

Author's Response: "Sometimes we sort too soon"?

Jong_Kahn2015.05.01 - 10:17PM1: Signed
Another good chapter! Like another reviewer, I like your combining science with magic. Seems to me that's how it would work, the super-natural with the natural worlds, not apart from each other. I have only one criticism, fourth paragraph up from the bottom. Seems to me Hermione doesn't want to leave Harry "...in the LURCH," rather than the way you have it. For someone to be "in the loop", they're included in something. But she doesn't want to leave Harry out of properly understanding. She WANTS to include him. So she doesn't want to leave him in the lurch. Other than that, a perfect chapter. On to the next!

Author's Response: God yes, you're absolutely right. Don't know why I didn't catch that. Will correct! Thanks

Jong_Kahn2015.05.01 - 10:03PM1: Signed
If that last line wasn't a challenge to her, I don't know what was! I like the way you have the two of them having to see one another's responses in a little different light--it bodes well for a continued mutual reassessment.

Author's Response: Glad that worked!

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