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breastlady2015.05.24 - 03:51PM28: Secret RevealedSigned
Are you happy now, Hermione? You ruined his surprise for you. He didn't get to finish the engraving because you were being a brat. You forced him to propose to you before he was ready because he wanted everything to be just right for you, but you had no concern for his feelings. You need a time out to think about what you've done, little girl.

breastlady2015.05.24 - 03:48PM28: Secret RevealedSigned
Public humiliation as a way to manipulate one's beloved is not a desirable trait in a mate. While Severus has social issues he needs to improve, Hermione needs some serious couples counseling. She doesn't deserve him at this point. If she loves him she needs to protect him from humiliation. If she loves him, she needs to trust him. Grow up Hermione. Please send someone to counsel Hermione in how to treat one's beloved. Maybe Remus would be a good person to speak to her. The rest of the idiots that went to the second floor to watch are all behaving selfishly and immaturely. I would have hoped that someone among them would have said, "Come on you guys. This is none of our business and you are all acting like a bunch of silly 12 year old girls. Give the couple some privacy. How would you like it if you wanted to say something privately and everyone hounded you? This behavior is beneath us. Let's go back to the Great Hall and mind our own business."

ASchaffalit2013.08.03 - 10:15AM28: Secret RevealedSigned
Oh, she is horrible, cruel, pushing the man to his limits in Front Of everyone. She is so selfish, The Great Goddess Hermy does not have to have an answer wrung from him. He gives her more true honesty and openess than she sometimes deserves.. Well, written to make her chose to act so childlike and foolish, a teenager , full of herself. Deep bresth...then again, it was so romantic , oh such a wondrous proposal. and they all Care about them both -- Brava

BulletTimeScully2009.06.14 - 01:01PM28: Secret RevealedSigned
I love the proposal....only....and I KNOW that it's in her nature to be curious and stubborn, but I feel like Hermione was being way too pushy with Sev about his secret. I hope she didn't ruin his intended proposal......and I love how everyone snuck up to the second floor.....Sev would never have proposed to her there if he knew they were watching. Great scene though! Lots of lemony goodness!

mroczna882009.05.24 - 03:46PM28: Secret RevealedSigned
Ok... I though it would be some BIG and DARK secret... And this scene is... too cute. Not like Snape at all. I like how she makes him spechlees (and I really enjoy this part xD ). I don't think she acts wrong- she's worried about him, so it's natural that she wants to know what he SO MUCH wants to hide.

Aurora2008.06.01 - 03:02AM28: Secret RevealedSigned
Didn't expect THAT!! I figured it was some kind of plan to help Harry or find and destroy Horcruxes, not making an engagment ring!! I never pictured Severus as crafting anything but potions, but of course, he wouldn't get an ordinary diamond ring; it would have to be something magical and absolutely unique in the world. Love how you included all the details about the material ffom which the ring was crafted, made it far more significant. You are such an amazingly creative writer!! Bravo!!!

Eden_Lilly_Snape2007.11.01 - 09:03AM28: Secret RevealedSigned
AAAAwwwww. -sniffle-

ninjaonfire2007.10.25 - 09:06PM28: Secret RevealedSigned
I do agree with the review left below mine. I don't see how Snape continuously puts up with Hermione's nagging immaturity. I hope she feels sooooo bad that she's, in effect, ruined Snape's big proposal. Take it down a notch Granger! Otherwise - YAYSNAPEPROPOSED!!!

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