Reviews for Aperio Veneficus
| marisamarinee | 2015.11.08 - 09:42PM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
| Interesting. |
| Zarrid | 2012.12.27 - 03:54AM | 5: Epilogue | Signed |
| Beautiful story - I greatly enjoyed reading it :-) |
| Asthart | 2012.05.04 - 05:50PM | 5: Epilogue | Signed |
| Me encanto, que maravilloso fic, aunque es muy corto jajaja es tan bueno que desearia mas. Sin duda tiene un contexto muy original.
Saludos y Animo!! |
| Jenniemay | 2011.09.07 - 11:22PM | 5: Epilogue | Signed |
| 04.21 and you forget to name her. Beautiful fic. |
| verasuspense | 2009.09.13 - 10:32PM | 5: Epilogue | Signed |
| The whole mystery of who was planting the evil gris-gris was dealt with in a rather prefunctory way, I suppose because of the time constraint you were under. Maybe you should think about a rewrite which would expand on it. |
| verasuspense | 2009.09.13 - 10:19PM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
| Wadn't it an amulet in the previous chapter, not a gris-gris bag? |
| Haystacks | 2009.02.23 - 03:32PM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
| I like the premise of this story. But the speech of the characters seems to be flowing somewhat unnaturally. And their characterization just seems slightly off. I think this story is enjoyable but could do with a edit. |
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